Reviews for Mergers and Acquisitions
Guest chapter 1 . 8/9
I just read the first chapter only to realise that it isn’t finished, if your not going to finish stories then please don’t start. I’m not reading anymore sorry but
futurecullen26 chapter 38 . 5/19
Kay I'm screaming into my hands right now. No big deal at all. Just grinning my little heart out. It's fine
Amineh1825 chapter 42 . 12/15/2016
I really hope you continue this story sometime soon!
Gubefan1980 chapter 22 . 12/11/2016
He should have been clear with Peter, he knows Edward loves him, and he should have realized Peter wanted Jasper to take the watch off because Peter knew it came from Edward, and calling another man baby, wow that's cold
Gubefan1980 chapter 21 . 12/11/2016
Jasper needs to end this now, he's with Edward and he's already ready to break Edward's heart. No mixig business with pleasure with more than one client. He needs to be honest with Peter
Gubefan1980 chapter 20 . 12/11/2016
Just ruined another chapter. Totally turned me off. Why oh why can't that fuckrr stay away.
Gubefan1980 chapter 19 . 12/11/2016
I skilled the whole chapter, can't stand the "I have no respect for other people's boundaries, so I'll just show up whenever I fucking please" cause I'm just such a charmer. Let Edward have a three-way with anyone but that slut.
Gubefan1980 chapter 18 . 12/11/2016
BTW, a threesome doesn't bother me, I just hate Riley, and I wish he would disappear, OD or something, yeah, I hate him that much. I have a former friend who is a druggie, stole from me, destroyed property. Brought a trick into my home while I was at Dr office, and then assaulted him. Skank is in jail now, thankfully.
Gubefan1980 chapter 18 . 12/11/2016
I just stopped when Riley cane in, just can't stand him, and why jasper doesn't have the fucking brains to ask who's at the door and keep the lock on is beyond me. I think Jasper has long since paid his debt, whatever the fuck it is, a long time ago.
Gubefan1980 chapter 17 . 12/11/2016
I had to skip over parts of this, okay a lot, I can't believe Jasper is using his endearment for Edward on Peter, and he knows peter is falling for him, he needs to break it off. I don't care about Peter, I just know what he's going to do to Edward. Very unfair and selfish of him. He can tell Tanya things are getting to personal with Peter. Guess he just can't give up the ego boost, between Peter and Edward, and annoying Riley on the side Jasper must feel like king of escorts. All these men wanting him unconscionable IMHO
Gubefan1980 chapter 16 . 12/11/2016
Yeah, can't read this one, father is a fucking self centered asshole, this is like arranged marriages between rich families, it doesn't matter what Edward wants, as long as it works for the family business, Edward is the sacrificial lamb. Carlisle is an asshole, and Esme is not much better. I gagged through this chapter once. Once was ten times too many.
Gubefan1980 chapter 15 . 12/11/2016
I hate to be mean spirited but I wish jasper would dump Riley's ass,,so they had a relationship, Riley plays on that too much He's a fucking leech and I really can't even stand reading about him anymore. And I'm sick of jasper demeaning Edwards feelings by saying he's too different. Riley has no respect for Jasper, he's just a user. Too bad he wasn't killed off, he doesn't deserve Jasper's loyalty
Gubefan1980 chapter 12 . 12/11/2016
Slimeballs like Spencer deserve to be pushed under a bus, preferably one traveling to fast to stop. Some people have no conscience, obviously Spencer is one. Too bad Edward doesn't have Jasper's shiv. Gutting him is too good for skanks like him
Gubefan1980 chapter 41 . 12/10/2016
't believe I kept skipping over this story, which I read few yrs ago, forgetting that this chapter was in this story, so fucking hot, I need new batteries so I can read,it again, so erotic, fucking hot. Great chapter, I was,rereading the chapter where jasper and Edward went on their first date, and decided to jump to the end. Very erotic scene, Edward on his,stomach for all to see. Smexy chapter thank for the mental image
Gubefan1980 chapter 10 . 12/10/2016
That was nice with Seth, he's a cute kid that one. Age of consent means nothing if there is more than three years between them, and Jasper should know that. Didn't Edward go through the service? That's not going to work out without trouble
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