|Reviews for The Immortal Coil|
| Ominous Spider chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Not bad. I enjoyed it. Also, the nerd in me feels it's necessary to point out that it wasn't Buffy partying with The Immortal in Italy. It was a decoy Slayer so no one would know where Buffy was. Andrew's idea. He thought it was hilarious.
| JarodLover chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
really enjoyed your take on this particular story line. would love to see the story continue.
| VioletTailyeour chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I really enjoy this story! Definitely one of the best fan fics I've read, I can't wait for more!
| anon chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I always wanted to see more of the Immortal, he seemed very cool, someone not a hero but not necessarily a villain either, on his with his own agenda, the only thing I didn't like was how it was implied he was against magic and it seemed to imply he was prejudiced against magic users, though maybe he just doesn't like using magic himself
I also wanted to see Jonathan come back with his super star powers as either a hero or villain or even better the Immortal's apprentice
The Circle of the Black Thorn and the Senior Partners primoridal eternal forces from the evil in the hearts of mankind it doesn't matter how much you hurt their earthly agents they have all eternity to work with
I wanted to see the Master, the Mayor, Adam completely human on outside and followers like him. Glory, Warren
I also wanted to see those vampires from that WWII episode of Angel and the Turak Hans also