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valiasedai chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Beautifully done story, and I loved the ending. It's refreshing to see such a different take on Cullen!
callalili chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
I haven't been on this site much lately, so in case you don't remember, I read "Cullen and His Infatuation" a while back and sent you a review, to which you sent me two rather defensive and irate replies. In any case, I'm glad to see that you've improved your grammar, though your dialogue is still improperly formatted. Your characterizations and interactions between the characters are also more solid. You still have a tendency to indulge in long bouts of unnecessary purple prose, which detracts from both the characterization and the realism of the story, but this is less glaring an issue than it was in "Infatuation." (And the sex was considerably more tasteful.)

In short: congratulations on your marked improvement, and I hope you will continue to do so.
acidninjacake chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Blimey, that was not only intense, but also incredibly well written. Wonderful.
Naela chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
oh dear, oh dear.

This was more than I expected, but I'm not complaining here!