|Reviews for Bring Him Home|
| ErinKenobi2893 chapter 3 . 1/7
This is one of my all-time favorite stories. I just love the imagery, and your characterizations are so perfect. :-)
| Waffles Risa chapter 3 . 8/7/2013
TT_TT too cute...
| Rumbleroar'sSlumberingCubs chapter 3 . 7/1/2013
So beautiful! I loved it!
| Tandy Sandman chapter 3 . 8/13/2012
it's a beautiful piece. thank you!
| StarsSpace chapter 3 . 7/14/2012
I love it! That was amazing! :D 3
| TheRoaringDragon chapter 3 . 3/1/2012
Wow, nice story. When I read it the first time, I thought "Hey, this is pretty good." then I went back and read all of the lyrics for the song you chose, and I was curious to what it sounded like. I looked it up, and now I can't stop listening to it. So I went back and read it again, while listening to it, and I'm still listening to it as I write this review. Congratulations on writing a great feel-good story(at least thats what I hope you were going for, either way I enjoyed it immensely). The only thing i want to ask is, did Obiwan get promoted to knight, or just take another step toward his trials to be one? Cus the lyrics say 'captain' so i was just a little confuzzled. Anyways, great story. :D
| Zelda12343 chapter 3 . 2/8/2012
I enjoyed this one. Especially the end. You portrayed their feelings very well.
| Sara chapter 3 . 10/25/2011
This is a great, small story! It nearly made me cry (really! I'm no Jedi, so I'm allowed to!)
so thank you for this intense momentof reading
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
You know that the tittle is a song on Les Miserables? I thought that was cool since Liam Neeson acted Jean Valjean and Qui Gon!
| Beloved Daughter chapter 3 . 7/8/2011
I loved how you connected this story with the poem. Somehow, it just made the story seem so much more realistic. Thanks for writing this story and sharing it with us!
| thesunwillshineclear chapter 3 . 3/7/2011
That was so good! I almost cried at the end because it was happy :).
| Talagan chapter 3 . 3/2/2011
I'm not generally a fan of first person, but in the first chapter it was done well and I enjoyed it. :) I really enjoyed this story very much! The characterizations were well done, I liked your OC (Swyer). All in all, a wonderful fanfic.
My only complaint would be a few spelling errors in the story; such as "loan figure", where it should have been "lone figure", loosing instead of losing, that sort of thing. The sort of things that the spell check doesn't usually catch, since technically each word *is* spelled correctly, just the wrong word (loan/lone, loosing/losing, etc). However, there weren't too many of those; certainly not enough to make the story unpleasant, just enough to make the editor in me raise its head. haha
Otherwise, this was a great story! Thank you very much for sharing. :)
| Tora Kouhi chapter 3 . 12/15/2010
A lot of fanfictions that try to play with affection end up being horrificly cheezy.
Congratulations on being one of the few who don't! Loved it.
| Crazy chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
This is such a powerful story! I really like the song at the end, having heard it on the radio many times. It is nice to read a song that I already know.
| Lady Logos chapter 3 . 7/24/2010
A nice story, no doubt about that. I would just hoped that you had gone maybe little more into the story, It was nice yes, and complete, the grammar was very good and so on.. But it only scraped the surface of things. it was emotional, yes, but a little more couldnt hurt hmm?
So what I mean is that more chapters, more things happening more.. Everything :D make the next story have more volume! You were very careful with this one, And I know that you got only good reviews for this (if you got any bad then they were wrong..) Because theres precisely nothing wrong with this story. It just.. Misses something, more details and more volume and so forth.
Like I said in the beginning (I have the habit of over explaining, Im sorry for this) everything in this story works. The characters are very loyal to their original counterparts, your grammar is good, and the plot is good, the idea is original and so forth. The only thing really in here is that you dont explain anything really, Yes you mention that theres a training solo mission ( or something like that ) going on but to those that dont know star wars very well and the customs of the Jedi, this can be really confusing, as they dont know, they have watched the movies and thats it, they dont have the knowledge to understand, and they cant figure it out, although there arent any plot holes or so that need explaining maybe little more information in your future stories wouldnt hurt the not knowing
Now I hope that I didnt left anything out, oh! and dont mistake this as a flamer or anything of the sort.. I really liked the story