Reviews for Tempted by Sweets
YokaiAngel chapter 2 . 11/12/2017
hideyomitsuno chapter 2 . 12/31/2013 dirty and cute. but, what was up with the ***before random words?
Angecael Gliorixx chapter 2 . 4/30/2012
'After it was all over' I was about to be so unhappy.. XDD
XxxInuYashaLoverxxX chapter 2 . 7/17/2011
I'm sweating & getting hot flashes...hmmmmmm, i wonder why? xD I luved it D
ziii chapter 2 . 1/11/2011
aww I'd love to see more of the teasing _ afterall, u dud mentioned that Sebastian made plenty of sweets so I thought u might like to make use of all that delicious treats instead if just the choc cake :) but the story was nice and sweet ;) thanks for writing this story3 it was enjoyable for me
ForgottenTales chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
Loved it! *swoons* Ciel is so cute, and Sebastian's plain hot.

The "exercise" was smexy, and kinky. Loved the sweets. *drools*
ForgottenxMemories chapter 2 . 9/7/2010
Lolz, nice.
ea4life11 chapter 2 . 8/4/2010
mmm, that was good, buuuut...NO PREPERATION?(missp?) OMJ, I FEEL BAD FOR CIEL, HE JUST RAMED INTO HIM LIKE THAT? yeah, i think if you had made it longer, it would have been awesome, cause i think its adorable and awesome, when the seme just cant hold back enymore, and they go rough it makes it sooooo smexy, you did a great job...mmm cake ~.
ulqui's-girl chapter 2 . 7/1/2010
/ wouah! I loved it really good job.

The fact that you used the sweets made me like it even more.
Monmusu chapter 2 . 4/19/2010
Hot! But I would suggest capitalizing new dialogue, and remember that it's usually separated from other speech and paragraphs. :)
Monmusu chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Hmm...I think this is about to get interesting XD
Skilvh and Shilvh chapter 2 . 2/19/2010
Skilvh speaking...

I like Sebastian's line, "If you want it, lick it"

Sent shivers up my spine. Imagine him speaking to you using that sexy tone! ~Kyah~ -nose-bleeding-

Ugh, continue with the story... hehe, I noticed you put '*'. Do you thought of it as emphasis perhaps? 'Cause I am quite annoyed with the mark. Or maybe I'm not used to see it? Well... More importantly, it's not your fault. I'm just saying my preference is all.

Overall... GOOD JOB!

sincerely speaking,


(p.s. Shilvh's currently out for the moment...)

-Unstable being ever born-
RedMoonLight009 chapter 2 . 2/19/2010
... Why cant I get me some sw- I just recalled I do have some sweets! And nice fiction by the way. so "sweet and fluffy" and creamy lol. Two Thumbs Up!
EnchantedFlame chapter 2 . 2/18/2010
wow, that was...very nice ;3

i love the whole idea with all the sweets 3

great story!
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