Reviews for Mcdonalds overtaken
noficforyou chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
ahahahah! niiiicee! XP
Katetanic chapter 1 . 11/1/2011
Roselie Parry chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
xD i can totally picture this happening and henry just kinda standing there looking at the ground after he shuts up... cuz Ashley's definitely the alpha in their friendship 3 3 love it :D *cookies for you*
cullenacious chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I randomly search 'mcdonalds' and this is what I get?

I love it!
TeenageNeko chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
LOL! that was funny!
WereCat the Assassino chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
Di-Bee chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
That story made me laugh a whole lot. Seriously, won't ever be able to go to macdonalds ever again; It somehow reminds me of a group command I had to help with, visiting UK with a groupd of french among whose I was the only one who could approximately get understood. I thought it was terrible. But that definetly is worse.

*checking for fingers* they're all here. That fries tasted good, though

Really funny fic

Surreal Squirrel chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Poor Billy...I LOVED it as always! :)

Keep writing (especially stories w/ more chappies!)

Good job and keep writing (that has actually become my slogan!)
melissaadams22 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Hey there,

AW this is a GREAT story. Unique idea and I LOVE it! WONDERFUL! Great work.

ShadowWolf43 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
wow lol "Poor Billy. He didn't need all of his fingers anyway" XD
FaerieBreath chapter 1 . 1/10/2010 likey :)
DZR chapter 1 . 1/10/2010

I love these little scenes you write from sort of everyday life. more please!