Reviews for Machine Of Evil
VG LittleBear chapter 17 . 8/1/2014
Hi, finally finished reading this story too! I see how this provides the frame for my favourite story collection!
Now I'm waiting for the boat story, Gibbs hasn't taken Ziva to the basement in 60 chapters, so in # 61 maybe? Pretty please!
Well done! Thanks and cheers!
marthapreston4 chapter 9 . 4/25/2014
An interesting concept and kind of fun
Jess chapter 17 . 4/13/2012
Tiva 3
rebelmagnus chapter 17 . 2/8/2011
Great Story!
VampiruLover chapter 17 . 2/8/2011
Not bad! Definitely could have potential to be developed into a huge story.
katesari chapter 17 . 1/3/2011
I like kidfics! this one was very good. have read others too, mostly they turn tony into a younger age(baby/toddler), and while thats very cute, I liked the fact that you used a younger version of Ziva and tony in his teenage years. loved it! Will go and read The adventures of the mini Gibblets! bye
Maggie chapter 10 . 6/19/2010
I like the idea of this story, but I was hoping that Tony would be younger than 16 maybe the same age as Ziva, or younger. I like Tony as a baby, or toddler stories.
FireBornInsanity chapter 17 . 4/6/2010
LOVED IT! GREAT STORY! I can't wait to check out the sequel!
CrazyChick chapter 17 . 3/30/2010
aw why u have to ends *wipes eyes*

but anyhow mini Gibblets sounds awsome cant wait to read

and awsome chapt as usuall :D
AlenaMai chapter 17 . 3/29/2010
im pretty sure that there was some tiva there, you really had to squint to see it.

you did a really good job with this story and i hope you post the sequal thingy up soon
melzdog123 chapter 17 . 3/29/2010
Yay! Can't wait for the next story!
jtarh2o chapter 17 . 3/29/2010
Great fic..enjoyed reading it.
jai03 chapter 17 . 3/29/2010
Tony and Ziva as kids was a great story and Gibbs as a daddy was funny. Cant wait to read the adventures of the mini-gibblets
macadoodle3 chapter 17 . 3/29/2010
ohh this is really one of my favorite stories! please please please please please don't keep me waiting for the mini-gibblets! 'cause that would be very cruel ;) now i'm dying to know what mischief they got up to! :D

anyways, lots of loves and abby hugs!

mack
Ghost chapter 17 . 3/29/2010
Good.
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