Reviews for Future Talk |
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![]() ![]() Never in my whole life have i ever read something like this. Never in my whole life have i ever known people can write this.. wonderfully. Magical. I cant fathom how your imagination works. I cant imagine how both hard but thrilling writing this for 6 years. But you brought magnificence into the world of YYH here. Its like as if.. you are the writer of YYH yourself with how amazing you write your storyline, with your storytelling, with.. everything. Just .. everything. Thank you. This is either my second or third time coming back to this but this time I decided to speak ip if i haven’t done so the first because i cant remember since it gas been.. years. But i come back every couple years when i forget about this. Do you understand? Even though i forgot the story itself i still know how wonderful it is , that i have to- no i MUST read again. And again. And again.. that.. is how much power you hold in this story.. you .. Dani.. are just so wonderfully talented and beautiful and I just cant get enough of it. Now.. its time for Speak. |
![]() ![]() 5 years in and this fic and it's characters still haunt me ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() God damn...I'm at a loss for words. This is one of the single most well written original characters in a fanfiction that I have ever read. The are no words to describe my gratitude that you created this masterpiece. I am going to miss hearing of Dani and Hiei like this. You and your story have a very special place in my heart forever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ay, me dolió el último diálogo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont know why but i love your rant in paragraph 2 LOLLL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love future talk so much |
![]() ![]() Hi! I don’t know if you check these anymore, but I just wanted to say that...this story is amazing. I love the length, the “side quests” that all tie together and contribute to the narrative. I love how you so perfectly picked up each character’s personality and tone, and still somehow also matured and grew them into something more. I love Dani and her imperfections. And I love Hiei of course. I hope one day to read the (hopefully) happy ending you might prepare for them. Thank you so much for this story and keeping it up. - Sarah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I type this despite 95% knowing you'll never see it. I've done most of my reading over the past 5 years on . But before I broke down and made an account there, I was here reading Fate/Stay Night fanfics. After reading the VN after watching the anime(and I think I will always remember the SHOCK of that first sex scene, because 'Wait the show was based on a SEX GAME?! And they depicted the sex as WHAT?!'), I wanted more Fate. I made an account here, and then FIMfiction, only after realizing I was spending a lot of time on the site, and thus it'd make following stories so much easier than 50tabs in Chrome. Although I STILL have 50 tabs open of reading queue. I don't comment very much, ESPECIALLY given how many chapters I've consumed. While I may comment about how much I liked a chapter or a story, most of the time it's questions about confusing scenes and dialogue, or how much I dislike how something was portrayed. If the story is meh I forget about it and move on. If I like the story I upvote and move on. Most of the time I REALLY like a story I'll favorite it, putting it on a public bookshelf so that authors can see it but little else. (I think the Favorite bookshelf defaults to public. The UI of the site has also spoiled me.) You've mentioned that you've gotten hatemail and death threats from the fandom. Even though I count YYH as my favorite anime of all time and the show DBZ WISHES it could be, I never had a burning desire for it to continue like I have other shows. Also likely that I just imagined that it wasn't popular enough to have people writing about it. So I don't remember how I found this story. Best guess is someone mentioned it on TVTropes, under good disabled characters. There are too many scenes and little bits in 862k words for me to even begin to gush about(A part of me will always hate you for kill Best Character Sweet though), but I think the core of it lies in how relatable Dani is, and maybe shouldn't be. Sure, short people may freely ask tall people to grab something above their head, or to open a jar tightened too much, or ask parents for help with homework, but by and large people hate asking for help. Maybe because they're mocked for doing so later by peers, or the people they ask. Dani is notable, relatable, because she is fiercely independent. Although maybe it's ableist to say she shouldn't be notable, because independence seems like such a common trait that EVERYONE shares so why note it. She obviously, UNDENIABLEY needs help to walk, yet HATES that so much she snaps at and takes offense to anyone who tried to help. It hurts to have to ask for help. It burns to know that you NEED it just to get by. I've been there. When my dystonia affected my hands it was a minor nuisance. When it affected my leg it was annoying. Attempted surgery to correct it made it more so. But it wasn't until college, when it really started to affect my neck and torso, where I began to feel the burn. The realization that without treatment I'd never be able to hold a job, or find love. The spasms eventually got so bad I decided on suicide by 26 if I didn't get brain surgery to help with it. Danielle's struggle to not be defined by her leg is why this story resonates so strongly with me. I love seeing the YH cast again and interacting with her and the world. But it's Dani who I relate to, and empathize with, and want to succeed. I'd like to think I'd have given her story a shot if it wasn't about YYH. But I probably wouldn't have. And I hate that. I hate that Dani being a crippled Main Character is such a novel concept. I hate that the disabled are invisible, or glorified as heroes for merely struggling to exist. I hate that so many forget to even treat the disabled as people. And I love you for treating Danielle Elaine Thompson as a person, and not just a bum leg. . .378/ Only because I have no idea how comments work on this ancient site |
![]() ![]() Your character OC keeps subverting my expectations. Its what made me literally sit up after the 2nd paragraph in the 1rst chapter. Because right there in the front you wrote out a 'fault' a personality different from what is percieved to be the 'ideal' for reincarnation/travel into another world. You wrote a personality. In this chapter (27) it happened again, something that made me sit up and think, no Dani I don't think you are right - even if you have some good points. But, I am looking forward to how this opinion that you have formed (with good reason from her viewpoint) develops for good or evil. I think I have recieved so much fanfiction that seeing a OC that doesn't blindly follow plot points and in a fanfiction that has such a long run is very... new. I like it. Thank you for the good read so far. Shall keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wish there was a part two of this story. I love Dani and Hiei I don't want it to end like this. please let them be together |
![]() ![]() ![]() This book is pulling my damn heart strings I want her with the futrue Koenma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is a Hiei fanfic but I can't help but slightly ship her with the future koenma |
![]() ![]() ![]() God damn, that obi-wan kenobi quote got me |
![]() ![]() Hi there author, I just finished reading Future Talk and I’m actually listening to Time After Time while messaging you. It is great. I learned a lot. It is evident that you took time(6 yrs as you stated). I enjoyed it especially the way you describe the settings and characters I can imagine how will it be if I’m there with them. I am also writing my own fanfic about Kurama and my OC. It starts on his life as bandit. My OC is a full pledged demon. Overall, it was really great. I’m not usually a person who can read 100 chapters but you managed to keep my interest. I will support your other works. Have you finished the Speak as well? or where can I find it? Happy New Year! |
![]() ![]() Lol I'm currently writing chapters where Yoko Kurama is training my OC. I can see this happening. done 1 chapter and she is almost lifeless. |