Reviews for Promise
horsesoldier chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
excellent one shot. you really are one of my favorite authors. :o)
cfangs chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Fantastic!
Jessica1971 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Beautiful :) I like your tent scene a lot better than canon! And I always wondered why one of the Cullens didn't run up to the campsite with a heater or something... or why Edward didn't run her back to a lower elevation before it got so bad... This was wonderful!
they call me red chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Fantastic lemony goodness.
LibraryLady08 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
A very interesting take. :)

-MJ
sophie921 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Hanky panky vamp style - Bella has got to have one hell of an internal furnace.
kiriny13 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Aww this was cute, I liked it!
CullenObsession114 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
loved it!
radioactive77 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Yes! Now this is what shoulda happened!
blackdogs chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
BRILLIANT. Please pass this on to Ms. Meyer and make her pull all existing copies of Eclipse/BD and let you re-write from this chapter on. :) I don't usually read the canon AU fics but I'll always read yours because I know how you feel about Jacob and I love that you right all the wrongs. I can't imagine anything better than Jacob hearing B&E go at it - bwahahaha. So win.
PhantomsAngel1988 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
loved it!
deleteme.deleteme.deleteme chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I liked it u should keep going and make ur own ending!
WhyNot11 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Amazing. I loved how you kept Edward in character even under the unusual...circumstances.
RiaMaria chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Excellent one-shot. Much better than the original tent scene, wish SM had thought of that ;).
Kneedshelp chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
And THAT is what you call a tent scene! Almost makes me want to go camping, if Edward was there.

Thank you for writing and sharing!
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