|Reviews for Promise|
| braziliangirl2 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Girl, like I just tweeted, I'm printing your o/s and trading for the tent scene pages of my Eclipse copy.
| Pire chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
You're one of my favorite sexy-time writers.
| 2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
God that was so good! I love your writing so much, you just know what to say and how to say it. The tone and tempo is always perfect and I so look forward to everything you do. Wish SM has the guts to write like this - she could have sold a lot more books! Thanks for sharing this with us!
| mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
THAT is what should've happened in that tent!
| akjamma chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
oh wow that was awesome ! this is the way eclipse should have been. take that jacob black !
| pearl421 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Amazing one shot, I feel all hot and bothered after reading it.
I love the whole scene and actually think the setting works really well!
Thank you for sharing!
| latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I love this tent scene better than the one in the book. :) Enjoyed it. Great job. :)
| twizzmom chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I LOVED THIS. Very well done
| cvds chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I loved it:) Sweet, hot and sexy!
| bulletproof chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Oh this made my heart sink and sing all in the right places. Sublime.
| Azucena34 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
| BoydBlog chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
That was fantastically envisioned, the dialogue expertly in character. Loved reading it!
| AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
That was a very nice, sweet, and sexy imagining of how it "could" have gone. ;-)
| Sunray16 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
As usual, you leave me breathless and wanting more. Amazing, beautiful, too good for words! Bravo! :)
| Lyta7 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Wow, I like this version better than the original. I wonder how this would change the rest of Eclipse and BD...