Reviews for Promise
pearl421 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Oh...My...Goodness!

*Regulates Breathing*

Amazing one shot, I feel all hot and bothered after reading it.

I love the whole scene and actually think the setting works really well!

Thank you for sharing!

Pearl421
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I love this tent scene better than the one in the book. :) Enjoyed it. Great job. :)
twizzmom chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I LOVED THIS. Very well done
cvds chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I loved it:) Sweet, hot and sexy!
bulletproof chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Oh this made my heart sink and sing all in the right places. Sublime.
Azucena34 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
lovely story
BoydBlog chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
That was fantastically envisioned, the dialogue expertly in character. Loved reading it!

BB
AbruptlyChagrined chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
That was a very nice, sweet, and sexy imagining of how it "could" have gone. ;-)
Sunray16 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
As usual, you leave me breathless and wanting more. Amazing, beautiful, too good for words! Bravo! :)
Lyta7 chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Wow, I like this version better than the original. I wonder how this would change the rest of Eclipse and BD...

Great story!
PockyxPocky chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
:D LOVED IT!
squarepancake chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
This is much better tent scene than the eclipse one.
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