|Reviews for Promise|
| MillerElizabeth chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Ok this was really good! I liked how you really kept the essence of the book present throughout the story, though it was erotic. But it really makes you think that you are there (non-creepily). Great job!
Mrs. Miller Cullen
| The Love Peacock chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
i loved the sans underwear detail. really made me laugh!
| RPattz716 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
So hot! They should have def added this to the book/movie...would have been way better than havin Jacob trying to keep her warm! lol
| Willowby chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
Lovely story. This is exactly what's missing from the books, although I realize they're in the "Young Adult" section of the bookstore. But still, there could be some hints of citrus, don't you think?
| Aeawenlluin chapter 1 . 7/3/2010
Love that Bella got Edward to give in. Really good.
| twilightmecrazii chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Loved it so cute & soo sweet amazing
| cb chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
i love it please post more soon...
| Bitten-by-Twilight chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
Awn! Why did you end it? I wanted more!
| xomessymutt17 chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
i loved this (:
| karen4honor chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
you are awesome! that was so very sweet and still very much in line with canon, in my opinion!
| nikkijoy chapter 1 . 6/4/2010
Just saw this rec'd on twitter and thought I'd have a glance, started reading and couldn't stop.
I love what you did with the tent scene, just the way it should have gone! Thank you for sharing that with us.
| martdg chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Well, I'm not sure how I missed this o/s. I better double check my author alerts, because I don't want to miss out again.
You write an excellent canon Edward. Not only was the tent sex deliciously enticing, but you made it believable. With the movie fast approaching, your Eclipse oneshots are an even greater pleasure to read. Think there's a chance we'll get a scene like this in the movie? ;)
Thanks for sharing!
| Here's Where the Story Ends chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
*sigh* I always forget how much I love AU until I read it, and then I remember. So gorgeous :)
With Eclipse just around the corner, I am reminded of all the places in that book I would have like to see them...well...connect ;) This was totally one of them and you did a beautiful job of it. I loved the physicality of it, but also the emotional nature of what was happening and the anticipation that comes when you've wait so long for something you wanted.
Thank you for writing this and filling in one of my holes. And no, that was not meant to be a dirty comment...lol.
| TwilightJemS chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
| 4everhis91 chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
This is the best AU I have read for this night ever ... I also thought good AU would be for Aro to help instead of the wolves ... after all they already knew Bella was human and she was going to be changed in the future. Aro actually had told them to leave and to prepare for her change. He didnt force her change before she left Italy. I think he would have completely understood waiting until after graduation, the wedding and then staging a accident. Infact that timeline to him would only seem like days. I have always kinda wanted to read an AU where Aro attended the wedding after helping destroy Victoria. After all she did break the rules. Anyway I hated the love triangle thing! Plus Aro would never fear loss of power to Carlisle... Aro can read ever though Carlisle has ever hade so Aro would know it is just not who Carlisle is. Please consider continuing this ... its a perfect starting place to get rid of the wolves and lead to a HEA :) Maybe even Charlie meeting someone for himself at the wedding :)