Reviews for The Maelstrom and the Water Princess
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Not badsounds like someone was inspired by Superman x-ray vision thermal vision you know Superman can do that when he crosses his x-ray vision with heat vision microscopic vision you should just another doing the Superman you wouldn't be a story but it still has great potential how many chapters
246vili chapter 7 . 11/30/2013
So, all Naruto has to do is destroy 3 food-silos guarded by a hell amount of shinobi, get out and do the same to 3 other silos in the oposite side of the camp? Piece of cake for him :D
246vili chapter 5 . 11/21/2013
Oh, so Konan is helping Naruto I see.
It was good to find out things about Mei's past.
246vili chapter 2 . 11/20/2013
Naruto is Mei's fiancee?! Wow, now that was unexpected for me. So their parents had made an arranged marriage before he was even born? Can't wait to find out more.
246vili chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
By the first chapter this is a promising story.
AirGearisthewayoflife chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
I love that u give him sideburns when he is only 12. And his hair is yellow not orange.
Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 5/27/2012
Adding to Faves.
Jamalymal chapter 2 . 12/14/2011
I hate you for killing off kyuubi. Btw if she could heal all those beating that he would have died from or regenerate his eyes couldn't she have just healed him while the missing non thought he was dead.
Amaranthais chapter 7 . 12/2/2011
Jonathan-L-Seig chapter 7 . 11/17/2011
loved it so far
pandora vanity chapter 7 . 10/14/2011
i wont say anything just update soon...
tstoldt chapter 7 . 8/7/2011
Please continue this is awesome
Komoridragon chapter 7 . 6/11/2011
is this over or are you just taking a long break?
WolfLeader4000 chapter 7 . 5/3/2011
Great story but I still dont get how old naruto/mei are.
Awsomeness7 chapter 7 . 4/14/2011
tsunade also is a sannin and if u have a brain and the ability to use it then u can probaly figure out that breat that big just arent nartural and a jutsu for ur apearance isnt that far of a strecth so ya... update!
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