|Reviews for Lethal Secrets|
| PenNoire chapter 12 . 4/27
I really enjoyed this story for a number of reasons. It has a drawn out, in depth plot that really makes you think, and the twist at the end was one I honestly didn't see coming. Alex's characterisation throughout was dark but realistic, and I applaud you for being brave enough to really delve into the dark, ruthless areas of his psyche that most authors seem to be afraid to touch on. The story was well written; a few spelling/grammar issues here and there (most notably 'loose' instead of 'lose', and there/their/they're a couple of times) but not major enough to detract from an enjoyable read.
The only things that bugged me a bit were the 'Americanisms' which, being a Brit, are really obvious to me. Students being able to park cars at school, especially in central London? Not likely. We call our third season Autumn, not Fall. Year 13 is the final year of schooling when we sit A levels, not 12. And I've never come across a school or sixth form having an American style graduation at the end of summer term as we don't get GCSE/AS level/A level results until mid August, well after term finishes; usually what happens is the school will invite back all the students for a celebration of some sort the following December, after the Universities let out for Christmas.
Overall, though, this was a well thought out, well detailed story, and I really hope to see more published work from you in the future.
| Jennosaur chapter 12 . 4/22
Wow, this is amazing! I love your plot (though the take-down was slightly abrupt), and even cried at the end, with Alex's opening up to Katie. You're an amazing writer :) Keep up the good work!
| Niamh x chapter 10 . 4/10
I want him to kill a scorpia in front of mark without a weapon and I want mark ti see his scars whether or not this happens is imaterial as your writing is impeccable! Love you for your chapter lengths x
| Niamh x chapter 9 . 4/10
I love this chapter, most authors are afraid to write alex this way, and those that do usually over do it or drag it out, i feel you've written a necessary emotional phase for alex and executed it perfectly. Anthony Horrowitz would be proud x
| Niamh x chapter 8 . 4/10
This is not okay. You should be arrested. sabina? Scorpia? What!? x
| Niamh x chapter 5 . 4/9
I love the tattoos, when does he get the tallys i wonder. I hope sab doesn't die. Alex is normally closer to Yassen than sabina hmm anyway i better read part V. Chou for now x
| Niamh x chapter 2 . 4/9
I'm more of a gunner than knives i think that particular knife is on the more attractive side but I'll stick to my berry (Beretta 92fs). This is my favourite auditorium scene so far but would've liked more sass from Alex x
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9
Instead of 'casually twirling' the SEc i personally would have him 'handke the knife with familiarity and almost affection' or something like that but incorporating affection x
| Niamh x chapter 1 . 4/9
Thankyou for giving me my new second favourite gun *after beretta 92fs*(my berry) Alex is sexy af me and you need a conversation before your writing kills my lip altogether. This is beautiful however, the decision to expel alex would not be for only Henry and he would have to argue Alex's case with an Education Board. The weapon part was my favourite, he was like a child with his favourite toys., i would like to have seen Ben uncomfortable with the excessive weaponry bit and a little more brotherly behaviour but it was perfect other than that and my lip hurts! Thankyou xx
| Niamh x chapter 1 . 4/9
I've only got to the 2nd paragraph (excuse my language) but holy fucking shit Alex is fucking hot! The level of lip biting IS TOO GODDANM HIGH! He's perfect and you're perfect for making him perfect and I can't take it! Will you marry me? Thankyou xx
| meme7789 chapter 1 . 4/4
i like the new alex. i like how you made alex cool, mature and finally just accept that he works for MI6. i look forward to reading the oncomig chapters. Thank you for all your hard work and i hope you
update again soon!
| La franaise chapter 5 . 1/21
Did you have any particular motif behind making the French president put the weight of the world on Alex's shoulders. But it seems plausible that the French would criticise the most: we have our "liberté d'expression" and all that, as well as a reputation for being fiery and outspoken (among the circles I frequent anyway...). So yeah, good choice.
| Just your average reader chapter 13 . 12/8/2014
I remember reading this awhile back and loving it, but I couldn't find it for the longest time. Luckily I did eventually find it and this probably my 10th time reading this now and instead of getting old it gets better and better everytime. For some reason I just adore mature Alex and you managed to create the perfect balance; he's good but not unrealistic. I regret not leaving this fic a review earlier but here it is! :D This is getting really long so I'lI hurry up. I love this story and it brings me to tears everytime I read it. You are an amazing author and should keep on writing. Good luck!
| Ionlyliveformyfandoms chapter 13 . 11/6/2014
Okay first thing is that I absolutely love the story it was marvelous I loved! I loved how you wrote about Alex's emotions and how his friend helped him. I've read many Alex Rider fics and I got to say that yours was one of my absolute favorites.
| titania2811 chapter 12 . 10/16/2014
As you can probably guess from the emoji I lived your story!