Reviews for Break To Breathe
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 35 . 9/18/2013
Hoooooh. Boy. Thats rough.
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 33 . 9/17/2013
This has to be the most romantic touching sweet fic i have EVER read, which is something because ive been reading fics for fifteen years lol. Five gold stars for u! :)
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 29 . 9/16/2013
Kudos to your awesome writing skills. Wow. I love that line about shika's not being engaged in life hahaa. And wow tragic neji is tragic!
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 25 . 9/16/2013
Great chapter. Your fic is so cool. I enjoy it a lot. I have never heard the word nape so often in a fic too. Lol
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 22 . 9/16/2013
Oh! Hahahha thats hilarious
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 21 . 9/16/2013
Wow this is such a great story. I really am so impressed with how well u have captured shikamaru and neji! Great job
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 15 . 9/16/2013
Wow thats intense! Awesome job this is so good.
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 12 . 9/16/2013
Why did neji call gai senpai instead of sensei?just curious
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 7 . 9/16/2013
Nice
Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
Hhaha wow this is so amazing. Well done
Guest chapter 3 . 9/16/2013
Love it
Anonymous123456787654321 chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Well now. Thats the best thing ive ever read. And thats saying a lot! Hahhaa maybe slightly exaggerated but wow! Hahah.
TonyRogers chapter 23 . 9/12/2013
I fell in love with this story the moment I read the first few lines. You really are talented and I am very impressed with the style of writing you possess. Your characters are so alive and real with the way they act and speak with one another. The scenes, both passive and active, are also very detailed and realistic. I can honestly say that this story is one of the best I have read, and I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great work! )
Solianna71 chapter 8 . 9/10/2013
I have a feeling you don't like Naruto much, huh?
Loki chapter 50 . 9/2/2013
Hi there,

I have to say, I've never read a story quite like this before. As you say about yourself - 'writing is my heart' - I could really feel that while I was reading it. I couldn't put it down even for a day and it got me in a wee bit of trouble at work, where I kept on reading on my smartphone :)
It is a brilliant piece, as are the sequels, and I found myself suffering alongside the characters and I just couldn't stop reading. You captured the characters so well, given they aren't as thoroughly portrayed in the anime/manga and I never was under the impression they'd be out of character or behaving oddly.
Your story is consistent and well-structured, which I find essential for any story to be enjoyable, everything that happens and every reaction makes sense in this story's universe and that made it so enjoyable.
When I noticed your story at first I was a little put off by the length of it, but once I started reading every word you wrote had its rightful place in it and your intricate descriptions just made me feel so much more engaged in this story rather than just being a reader of it.
What I mean by all that is just that I absolutely loved your story, I am really impressed and I am a little envious of your captivating style of writing. I can't wait for the last part to come out and whatever you do, please don't ever stop writing, otherwise great talent will be wasted.
I'll leave you with the words of Mumford & Sons, which kept ghosting through my head while reading this piece:
'Love, it will not betray you, dismay or enslave you, it will set you free. Be more like the man you were made to be.'
Thank you.
Loki
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