|Reviews for Break To Breathe|
| junjou yaoichick chapter 37 . 12/25/2014
great story! this is my one by far!
| Lazypage chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
I love how starts out plot heavy.
| Angelazzy chapter 50 . 12/6/2014
I'm sorry for not being an active reviewer. But Jesus Christ it was because your story was TOO good! I just couldn't stop reading! I would like to thank you so so much for writing this amazing piece of work. You are a terribly amazing writer and the feelings you evoke are so real. They are real to me. God the feels.
| tiger-lilly-876 chapter 49 . 11/8/2014
love this chapter xxxxxx
| M chapter 50 . 8/2/2014
I have never reviewed a story before, but as this is my second time reading this story- I just had to! I seriously wish I could write as well as you do. The story is just so heartbreaking to me yet I love it so much. So many moments that are just PERFECTION. And many sentences were so perfect I reread them more than once. Thank you for writing such an amazing thing. You could never understand how much I loved it.
| This isn't what it looks like chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
50 chapters...Holy fuck, I'm gonna be up all night T.T
| Baby chapter 50 . 7/5/2014
I just started kinda crying once i got to the last line. It wasnt because they didnt manage to stay together but because for the last 3 weeks I've been reading a few chapters every night to get here ad now that I'm here I feel like I've lost something because I wont be able to continue on with their story, your writing. Thank you. Thank you so much, you've brought a lot to me in these 3 weeks. x
| Amanda A Fox chapter 50 . 6/23/2014
OMG... It's a wonderful fanfiction, and I lost my words... Because no words can fully describe your story. From beginning to end, I loved it...! I printed most chapters to highlight the important words and learn vocabulary and improve my english (yes I'm French) Thanks to you, in my english exam, I felt at ease. Working and relaxing, it was perfect.
Thanks for this story, I'll read more ;)
| anonynous reader chapter 31 . 6/21/2014
Damn... i just had to review...this story is awesome!...youve perfectly caaptured the calharacters (for me anyway) . .. a pairing i wouldnt have thouught would work- works!...amazing!
| Tandy Sandman chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
This is an amazing piece! Especially the fact that there is no defined way for the relationship is (i.e. who's top or bottom). I can't wait to read the rest and keep up the FANTASTIC work! Oh, and thank you for sharing!
| Guest chapter 50 . 4/29/2014
This story is absolutely amazing!
| Kaderin chapter 1 . 4/3/2014
I read this a few years ago and forgot to favorite!
Not sure if I commented before, and I can't really remember more than a few random scenes and basic plot, but I wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed reading this. I've never read any of the sequels though I've seen them around, and I'm not sure I will any time soon because I think that (from what I can remember) the ending of this fic closed it nicely. But maybe someday I will, and I'm sure I'd enjoy them just as much.
Thanks for writing!
| Memomo chapter 37 . 2/23/2014
I just need to share this: as I was re-reading this beautiful chapter, just getting to the good stuff (you know what I mean), *just* as there's a flame/fire analogy, my ipod-set to mix-all-starts playing Monty Python's 'Medical Love Song'. I'll leave it to any who read this to look it up, and join me in the hilarious inappropriateness of that song, at that moment. I did skip, once I stopped giggling. Cheers all.
| sasugadesu chapter 2 . 2/21/2014
So I was trying to tell you something before I was interupted.
Right, I am trying to understand how someone like you is real but I think I will never know. Maybe you sold your soul to the devil, I do not know but what I know is that your story has touched me and I will never forget it and I want to tell you THANK YOU SO MUCH! I am happy you were born 3
| sasugadesu chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Hello, do you know what you did to me with this story? You are welcome to tell me what I am going to do with my life,now.
I am trying to understand how some