Reviews for Overly Critical
unreliablekamikaze chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Left-handed again. XD

THIS WAS AWESOME ITS GOING TO FAVORITES

But really. Was as awesome as Prussia thinks he is.

And frankly, Prussia thinks he's veryveryawesome. So.
heygodcomplex chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
i love your sense of humor and this is absolutely brilliant.
why won't someone delete this chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
And then England gets it.

But I don't. xD

I loved this, though. :)
Ophelion chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
Haha this is cute! I love the ending, it's so nice and sharp and funny! xD Poor England, he just can't enjoy US culture, huh. Not that he's trying very hard...

My favourite part aside from the last line would have to be America's remark about his eyes being his social policies and would "rather not touch them". Hee hee! Clever.

Thanks for the read! Awesome work. :D
Utenakun chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Haha, well done. "I'd rather not touch them" completely cracked me up. XD
Ceri Moriarty chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Aw, poor England! Forced to spend time with his annoying little brother…

[sniggers]

Oh, the lolz.

Very nicely done!
bluechaser chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
haha, this is funny as hell!

Love it!
bobalinabokonon chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
Ah, the giggles. Cure for a cold, they are.

Dunno why, but the Disney Peter Pan never bothered me (and the book might be one of my favorites like ever and now I have to reread it, huzzah). I miss the narrator's voice, but I love both Tinkerbells!

Also America and England and Hetalia! and phlarghl.
Sayabean chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Excellent. Love how you keep your characters dead in character and the comedy is just killer. This is the best show of USUK ever!
chibiaries chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Squee! So. Cute.

I loved the Peter Pan lines, and especially the part with the Beatles and England's smugness. So very in-character for both of them.
Shelly-Sells-SheaShells chapter 1 . 1/29/2010
"She makes it a party in the USA."

PFTT XD I'm still laughing over that one. Next time that is on the radio, I will be getting many stares because of the non-stop giggling. Great dialogue and I love how you kept them in character.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Oh England. You are a gentleman in an unholy land.

Loved it.
Canadino chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
don't know why but I love it. It's so simply America.
Vicious Whispers chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
"And anyway, she makes it a party in the USA.”

England stares.

And then England gets it.

And then he says, “/No/.”

Oh my god, your dialog is amazing. xD

Hilarious story was hilarious.
accented chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
YE.

This was brilliance, Ren, just brilliance. I love the dialogue, which you are spectacular at, and their interaction was perfect.

“Best band ever,” America says while he knocks over a lamp. England smirks.

“Mine.”

America makes a face, “Killjoy.”

was amazingly hilarious.

Thank you so much, Ren!
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