Reviews for Unforgivable Curse
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 5/13
Absolutely mind-blowing. That is what this amazing one-shot is. Mind-blowing. Thank you so much for sharing this short tale of yours with us.
DylanL chapter 1 . 4/3
Interesting possible start though the way you did start vox coporis was really good
meja9201 chapter 1 . 3/19
It's been a while since I read any of your stuff. I'd forgotten how awesome a writer you are. You'll probably never see this but thanks anyway ;)
Sammyboy94 chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
I like it alot, i wish there was more to it.
Jemma Blackwell chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
This makes a good one-shot, so yes, thank you for posting it.
Ebianna chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
*sobs*

This is what I wish I could have seen in the actual book. It isn't far-fetched, and certainly in-character. Well done! :)
Sixstringsamurai83 chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
Okay,
I have heard about you, your stories tend to have lasting effects on everyone i've asked about you
now i see why, your ability to build foundation for each characters is amazing it does help that i am always looking for a good Harry and hermione story i wish you could make this one longer i'd like to see how he reacts after being as he is always trying to be tough i'd like to see how he Handles breaking down to hermione now i have questions
I know in your other story (which i love that poem its my Absolute favorite, to this day it still gives me lasting chills) Vox corporis that Harry and hermione find love or at least that's what i have been told in this story (though it's completed) do they romantically love each other as well or is it just friendship love? because in my mind though the six and seventh books pushed him towards Ginny i still think in that world harry and hermione could have found eachother i don't know if i'm the only one but i can't read the sixth and seventh anymore i just can't Ginny was terrible even now after J.K rowling said she meant Harry and Hermione to be together i still don't like it.
I'm trying my hand at writing and though i'm quite creative as i'm sure you can see from this note i have terrible spelling and grammar but there is a story i was working on that has been done at least once i'm sure but in the movie there is a scene where Hermione runs to a room crying about won won\ and lav lav. and she asks "how does it feel" thinking he loves Ginny in my idea He loves Hermione and seeing her love Ron hurts him so when he says "it feels like this" he means seeing her love ron.. i know i'm sure it's silly and been done but i'm sure you could possibly make it Amazing.. Sorry for my terrible Drabble i just mean to compliment your story and Ask that question so i'll end this Terrible excuse for a Review here
Amazing work.
-Jesse-
Anyango chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Utterly beautiful.
piece2gether chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
This is so sweet. Good Job
themergitonian chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
This is good.
pastel kittens chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Kind of made want to cry for Harry as well. Good thing he has Hermione with him!
calicar chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
This is beautiful. What a true testament to Hermione's loyalty and compassion. She'd do just about anything for Harry. And she has, repeatedly! Harry's open vulnerability to Hermione is just heartbreaking, knowing just what he's been through and how hard he tried to keep it a secret. Also the depth of trust he places in her hands and that explicable knowledge that he'd do just about anything for her as well? Tragic. What a wonderful piece. Thanks so much for writing this.
bookaholic2000 chapter 1 . 8/1/2013
I like it. Hermione would do anything for Harry, wouldn't she? Her chracter is very true to canon. Good job!
TheGoldenTrio09 chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Herarry! Herarry! write more1 I LOVE IT
bill brinkley chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Count me amongst your many fans. This little story is a gem. I can see why you didn't put it in VC.

I wish you would write more HP stories. What a wonderful talent you have. VC is easily the best HP fanfic I have ever read, surpassing Rowling.
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