|Reviews for Something's Wrong|
| Lukus chapter 26 . 10/7/2013
Make a sequal, please and thank you
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/17/2013
Love it gal,love the whole story ;-D
| you're chapter 9 . 12/12/2012
I love this fanfic SO much.
Deep down, I knew you couldn't kill off Macy but I was bawling when it came to that part anyway :p
| RS Fan chapter 26 . 7/20/2011
Woaaahh . Longest story I've ever read here .
I'm going to start with the cons:
I really, honestly, HATED all the spelling errors . There were so many it was unbelievable . I saw in one of you author's notes that you didn't have spell check but you could always read over your story . You even spelled Stella's name wrong and made it into "Stekka". All the spelling & punctuation errors made the story a little bit difficult for me to read parts of the story .
Also; a lot of the story seemed rushed & sometimes confusing . Some things were not as detailed as they should be & that's why I got thrown off on some of the scenes in the story.
Okay . Now here are some pros:
The story line is very captivating & interesting . The story made me cry & touched me in some ways . The drama was overwhelming but realistic. At some parts the characters were portrayed nicely & Macy never seemed to lose her "Macy shape" in the story . I liked the bickering going back & forth with Joe & Kevin because that's how the show usually is , & uhm; yeah .
I hope you continue writing .
- RS Fan(:
| lEnE1998 chapter 20 . 5/15/2011
| hybridlovely chapter 26 . 1/27/2011
this was so sweet and sad i almost cried out loud not kidding. keep up the good work and just message me if you ever need help on a story or anything id be happy to help im just awesome like that. haha jk cant wait to read some of ur other storys. :D
| CarCarBeepBroom chapter 20 . 1/9/2011
btw. this made me cry... :((
| BunnyQueenLivesForever chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
yea next chapter please!
| FeatherDaydreamer chapter 26 . 11/2/2010
OH, MY, GOSH! Best ending EVER! That was sooo great how you fit in that little bit about her being pregnant, I LOVE IT!
| Em chapter 26 . 9/20/2010
your story was amazing ! i loved it :) i hope you keep posting :)
| Kim chapter 26 . 8/31/2010
hey this was the offical best amazing nacy story ever at the begining of chapter 26 i tought u were killing macy off i was like nooooooooo and shouting at the laptop so glad it worked out for nick and macy i really really hope there will be a sequal please pretty please it would be so good her pregnent and how and nick deal with it and sorry for spelling mistakes by the way xxxxxxxx
| Kim chapter 25 . 8/31/2010
Hey the last part nearly had me i tears again you have got your wish of 200 reviews lol this has taken me hours to read but i enjoyed it very much and will be following all your latest stories in the near future and once again thankyou for the best read ever and i love nacy so much only reason why i watch jonas and sorry for the spelling mistakes i wrtoe fast xxx
| Kim chapter 24 . 8/31/2010
aww hope macy is going to be okay xxx
| Kim chapter 23 . 8/31/2010
hey great chapter yet again where is Osoyoos never heard of it xxx
| Kim chapter 22 . 8/31/2010
hey this is the best chpter you haave wrote thankyou xxx