Reviews for Fatherhood
Lifeless and Loveless chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
So Roy was the one that passed out? That's really funny. I liked this fic and poooor Al.
OwlCookies XD chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
LilBlueBear chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
LOLOLOL, but u didnt tell us if ed or roy fainted or not! xP
Koneko Hoshi chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
That ending was awesome. I loved the "shut up Ed" at the end.

f.y.i. Back then, it was not common practice for men to be present during childbirth.
Ris Fallon chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
For some reason, the ending made me giggle the most. Just because of the bet, and what it implies. For some reason it felt a bit choppy to me, but it was otherwise pretty good. Poor Al [ He really gets the sore end of every deal, eh?
Orange Singer chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
I love this!
X-Feli-Chan-X chapter 1 . 1/12/2010



this is the best!

i love the bet!

seaweedfma chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
I was the one she wrote that one for. I loved that, and I loved this one as well.

That is so cute. I would love to see you write more about this!
Evil Little Dog chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Hee! That's funny. Does COM know you wrote a story based off of hers?
UP2L8 chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Hah! This is brilliant! Funny and believable and everyone is so IC it almost hurts. Great work!
shinespire chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
aw, so cute!
little miss clueless chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
hahahah Roy passed out... Cool...

It's one awesome one-shot...

Keep it uP! v(0)v