Reviews for Stars
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
A great story. Very well written.
TheNightimeSky chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Great job - I like how you kept both of them in character, so that Two-Bit didn't suddenly become this passionate, deep kinda guy, and Pony and him have a nice little chat about stuff.

It didn't go very far, and you still managed to leave it off so that some message got through to us.

"I can't help but think that both of us were wishing I was Johnny Cade."

That was excellent, I must say. :)

One thing. You said, "Two-[b]it." Capital "B" in Two-Bit. ;)

-TNS
infinite grey chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I like the serious side of Two-Bit you have given. This is well written, and I like how Two-Bit seems to notice that Ponyboy is embarrassed to admit he thinks about the stars. Good job!

Jamie.
calla lilly rose chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
I like the voice you give Two-Bit. It's refreshing. Good job. Wished it were longer. Calla