|Reviews for Our time of lying|
| thesimplestterms chapter 19 . 11/16/2013
Hey, I know a lot of time has passed since you finished this but I just wanted to say that this was really really good and I loved it.
One of the best Lancitty fanfics I've found, if not the best.
It was really awesome, the plot, the feelings, the characterization..everything :)
| natasha ferguson chapter 1 . 6/25/2013
it is very sad! poor lance & Kitty!
| Cherie chapter 19 . 2/8/2013
I've just came across your story and was hooked from the beginning I had to read all 19, i would love to read more about these two please keep writing .
| janzen222 chapter 19 . 11/5/2012
i wanted to cry love this story. I'm starting to hate reading such awesome ficts damn you awesome writers with you now included
| Novice Comic Lover chapter 19 . 7/10/2010
There are no words good enough to describe how I feel about this work in its entirety. Just know I'm grinning like a big idiot.
When are you going to start something else? I'm dying to see how you're going to top this.
| The Evil Hillbilly chapter 19 . 6/29/2010
I wanted more suffering, but I still loved this story: every single heart-piercing chapter of it. D
| The Evil Hillbilly chapter 17 . 6/4/2010
i can't wait to see how this story is going to end!
| The Evil Hillbilly chapter 16 . 5/26/2010
i love your story it's so deep.
| The Evil Hillbilly chapter 15 . 5/21/2010
oo i can't wait for the next chapter!
| Novice Comic Lover chapter 15 . 5/21/2010
And you say you're not good at dialogue. This back and forth was absolutely perfect! The way their words echoed each other was probably the best part about it, but it's hard to decide. Each interaction they have is making me crave the next. And I'm dreadfully curious about Kitty's answer, if she does have one. I'm not as patient as Lance seems to be about it though, so hopefully you'll give us one and soon!
And something about the chapter before this, there is a line that has been haunting me ever since you wrote it. "I didn't want anything less than him kissing my sins away." AGH! So beautiful that I can't help but to keep coming back to it and reading it over and over and over and, well, you get the point.
| The Evil Hillbilly chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
D yes update!
D yes they finally got together again!
D what will happen next?
When is Piotr coming back? How will he take this? Will Kitty tell him? Will He find out? Will he be ok with it like in every other story where Kitty leaves Piotr to go back to Lance? Will Kitty screw it up again? Will Lance be too tired of it? Will my questions be answered?
| Novice Comic Lover chapter 14 . 5/14/2010
ARGH! How do you do it? This scene, where they FINALLY came together was the most beautifully written love scene. Usually you just find smut on fanfics, which can work for its own purposes, but this was actually moving.
And then Kitty wrecked it. ARGH! Not that I'm at all surprised, because she is completely self-destructive.
| Novice Comic Lover chapter 13 . 5/3/2010
I really hope you have a great trip, but know that I am also anxiously awaiting the next update. With each chapter you have me loving this story more and more. Not that I didn't love the earlier chapters that sent the lovers on their own self-destructive journeys and the amazingly well-written musings, but I'm over the moon with these horrifically tantalizing and complicated meetings that you've been writing of late. I find myself wondering more and more how you will write the breakthrough when Kitty and Lance finally overcome the walls they've put up and the obstacles that they've forced on themselves. I know however you choose to do it, it will be one of the most poetically perfect and beautifully worded pieces that I have ever read.
| The Evil Hillbilly chapter 12 . 4/23/2010
i love how emotional your story is. I love how you can just feel both Lance's and Kitty's pain with them. You're an awesome writer. Keep writing!
| Novice Comic Lover chapter 10 . 4/2/2010
Well, damn. I feel like a total jerk, because here you've been giving me these wonderfully thoughtful reviews and I haven't said a single thing about this story. Considering how I've been eating up every word with relish, savoring each little moment, that's terribly selfish of me. Especially because I almost immediately find a way to read the chapters as soon as I've found out you've uploaded them. Actually, I always go back, often times just a chapter or two, but sometimes to the very beginning, to really set myself up for what's coming next. So, I apologize for being such a bad reader, but even more so for being such a bad fellow writer. I know how precious reviews are, so I should remember to take the time to give you what you're due. Now let me make up for it.
First off, I always love how you go into such painstaking detail with the thoughts and emotions, though I must say you have gone above and beyond your other works in this story. When I read this, I feel what they feel, which, to be honest, leaves me horribly depressed, but in a good way, if that makes sense. I love the immediate juxtaposition of Kitty and Lance's thoughts, which really gives the reader the best vantage point, seeing what even the characters don't see for themselves. I find myself shouting at the computer, trying to tell them to stop being such dolts and be together, since they both obviously need to be together to be alive, complete, them.
Also, I find it fascinating that in a way, Kitty and Lance have dealt with their breakup in the same ways. They both spiraled into this deep denial where they became someone else, but just in totally different ways, which fits. I mean Kitty's just as numb if not more so than Lance, but she goes on pretending that everything is perfect, moving on with Piotr and school. It's fascinating how she refuses, up until this chapter, to admit how she really feels. It's so honest and realistic, and let's face it, we've all been able to relate to this feeling in some way or another, denying ourselves something, someone that almost hurts us more to give up than to give in to. I especially love this chapter because she finally sees how all that she wanted for her and Lance she really had all along, which again, we all know feels like the world is slapping us, mocking us for being so incredibly ignorant. They had their spots, their moments, their love, and she couldn't see it because she was too busy thinking about how she was hiding him, and consequently at least part of herself, from the X-men. And Lance has so eloquently risen from the ashes like a phoenix, first destroying himself until that ironic hookup with a stranger named Kitty and then turning himself around. He's still not perfect in all the respects that he thinks he should be, but he's a better him, and he can even admit that Kitty is at the heart of it all.
I look forward to many more chapters, and I especially look forward to many more exchanges between the two. Each little bit of this story has me on the edge of my seat and I'm dying to find out what will happen. But, as much as I'd love you to upload the whole story right this second, I don't want you to rush, because then I'd miss the flow of it all. You may have moments where your grammar isn't perfect or whatever, but I find that I often just fix it in my head subconsciously, hardly noticing or making me lose that strong connection you give to the characters. Your writing is special and beautiful, and if you ever publish a book, which I hope you do, something filled with characters of your own making, but your style nonetheless, I am sure that I will cherish it as much as I do this.
I hope that starts to make up for my lack of reviews, and I wish my words could truly express how this piece has touched me. I cannot wait to read more from you, whether it be this story or anything else you may choose to write. Thank you for all of your wonderful reviews and even more for your contribution to the writing world. It truly would not be the same without you.