Reviews for Follow Through
Ocean Starfly chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
Haha, clever! I love the way you portrayed their friendship and used basketball to compare to love. I was sort of expecting Takeru to connect basketball and Daisuke's relationship, but it's so much better than Daisuke connected it instead.

This is really well written and I didn't notice any grammar mistakes. Keep up the great work!
Angel-Hunteress chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
this was so cute! Although I'm usually more of a Daikeru/Daikari/Takari fan, I'm not complaining. Good dialogue, good metaphors...and really cute story! )