Reviews for Shattered Innocence
brendafay chapter 24 . 7/8
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Rain of the Forest chapter 17 . 6/28
Sam: See, I told you.
Alright, alright. I'll let you have this one. Happy?
Rain of the Forest chapter 15 . 6/28
Sam: Why do I figure that Sarah is going to turn out to be Rebecca's kid?
Um, they mentioned an abortion, you know?
Sam: Doesn't mean that it was completed. It could have been mentioned by the parents to not give Tim any hopes. It would have also been the perfect revenge against their rebellious daughter. 'Stay away, or your brother and daughter get hurt', you know?
I guess, but until I read something that proves it, I'm still saying that it's not possible.
dreamer 3097 chapter 24 . 6/23
This is good
Delete-please-7850065 chapter 24 . 5/24
Very good great job. Maybe you can do a squeal about Sarah and her parents.
Guest chapter 24 . 5/1
This is terrific, really taking the canon characters and developing them in new, but perfectly in character ways...

Thank you for an absorbing and deeply satisfying story.
Delete-account-please-7492250 chapter 24 . 2/2
Glad that got the bad guy but other then that this was really good.
Deleted-account-please-7249024 chapter 24 . 11/1/2015
Good I hope there will be a squeal cause it would be cool what Sarah will be with her parents and what is going to Tim parents.
Delete-account-please-6878249 chapter 24 . 6/30/2015
I loved the story so good work on it.
Delete-account-please-6829121 chapter 24 . 6/11/2015
Loved the story.
Cassandra30 chapter 24 . 3/30/2015
Superb! You are very creative. It is obvious you have found your niche. Your stories are believable.
Cassandra30 chapter 23 . 3/30/2015
That's practically a confession that McGee Sr beat Tim. Abby did well here. Excellent story!
Cassandra30 chapter 22 . 3/30/2015
Awesome! Go Team!
Cassandra30 chapter 21 . 3/30/2015
Abby really has issues. Poor judgement here is the least of them.
Cassandra30 chapter 20 . 3/30/2015
Yippee! Gibbs got the son of a biscuit eater! Get that child eating person imitating a mother he calls a wife as well!
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