|Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan|
| lulabelljane chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
This was ALL kinds of hot...I loved every second of it..and if you do continue it...That would be awesome! :)
Good luck in the contest! :)
| immortal werepire chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
i love how this combined two of my favorite things! ncis and twilight. hmm im picturing edward as dinozzo, since hes my favorite in ncis(: anyways i really hope you do turn this into a mini story, it'd be AMAZING!
| ell6ange chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
hell yeah bring on the next chapter... good detail and character build
| marisky130 chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I think you should definitely continue it.
| Purple1983 chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
*fans self* really hot stuff! :)
| Cowgirlgraphics chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
This story is effing great! I'd love to read more - hell, it would even make a great multi-chaptered story! I am so glad that my buddy and Twi-FF h00r, Coxie sent me over to check it out!
| Twi-Mom12292005 chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Interesting, nice lemon... Who doesnt love edward anyway, anybody writes him? I would love to see what happens next...
| karolkid chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Loved it! Please continue, we want to know what happens!
| SabLuvsLogan chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
DAMN HOT story, continue it for sure! alerting just in case ;)
| It'sAllInTheMindYaKnow chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I would loove for this to turn into a mini.
| ZiggaZigAhh chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I loved this and really, really want to know what happens next and how the rest of the investigation goes.
| BathProductAddict chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Oh please, please, please continue to write more. I love this beginning.
| Z. Nicole chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Awesome so far. Keep it going. please!
| tracirai chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
This was great, and I definitely want to know what happens next!
| Elvire23 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I love it! I truly hope you continue with the story PLEASE.