Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan
cmpdred chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
NCIS is one of my favorite shows, and it's even better with Edward as a Special Agent. I hope you continue this!
rmcrms5 chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
can't wait for more
lulabelljane chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
This was ALL kinds of hot...I loved every second of it..and if you do continue it...That would be awesome! :)

Good luck in the contest! :)
immortal werepire chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
i love how this combined two of my favorite things! ncis and twilight. hmm im picturing edward as dinozzo, since hes my favorite in ncis(: anyways i really hope you do turn this into a mini story, it'd be AMAZING!
ell6ange chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
hell yeah bring on the next chapter... good detail and character build
marisky130 chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I think you should definitely continue it.

Purple1983 chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
*fans self* really hot stuff! :)
Cowgirlgraphics chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
This story is effing great! I'd love to read more - hell, it would even make a great multi-chaptered story! I am so glad that my buddy and Twi-FF h00r, Coxie sent me over to check it out!

~ Cowgirlgraphics
Twi-Mom12292005 chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Interesting, nice lemon... Who doesnt love edward anyway, anybody writes him? I would love to see what happens next...
karolkid chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Loved it! Please continue, we want to know what happens!
SabLuvsLogan chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
DAMN HOT story, continue it for sure! alerting just in case ;)
It'sAllInTheMindYaKnow chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I would loove for this to turn into a mini.
ZiggaZigAhh chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
I loved this and really, really want to know what happens next and how the rest of the investigation goes.
BathProductAddict chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Oh please, please, please continue to write more. I love this beginning.
Z. Nicole chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Awesome so far. Keep it going. please!
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