|Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan|
| VeCha chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Nice! :)I really liked the story.
I'd like to read the rest, just for the investigation to come to a close, with a slight epilogue, giving us a look at a future for E & B... ;)
| SleepingBeauty247 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
You definitely have to continue this...Pretty please with a fuckhot NCISWard on top!
This entry was really good and I really like where it is going so far and really, want to know how it would play out...
Like for instance, was Bella on birth control?
Because we all know Edward didn't take the time to slip on a condom so I want Bella to end up pregnant with Agent Cullen's baby...you know just to add a little more drama to the mix!
Anyways, I definitely loved it and would most definitely love to read more!
| juliedons chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
oh i loved it, you should definitly write more on it :D
| An Officer and a Gentleman chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Thank You for your entry in the "An Officer and a Gentleman" contest. This entry has been added to the contest C2.
Good luck with the contest.
| FFReader75 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
I like it! I like it A LOT!
| Scarlett72 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
That was so damn hot. Please, please write more. I think it could easily be more than 2-3 chapters.
| CullenObsession114 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
| Amber Energi chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
I'm totally interested to know if she is playing him or not. I keep changing my mind. I would definitely like it if you expanded it beyond a O/S.
| Shelly chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Love this story! keep going)pleasee
| Lydz07 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
aww what happens next? i say yes to a mini-story!
| Lissagirl26 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
need to know whats going to happen please I love this it is a great start
| LivinginaFairytale2t11 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Omg u have to wite more of this!
I was thought jacob was i jackass! lol!
| Saritadreaming chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Oh yeah baby! Loved it! Would love to see it continue...especially the lemons!
| TheNinthCullen chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Please continue..I want them to catch Jacob and put him away
| nitsuAPJ chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Yes! More please!