Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan
mauralee88 chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
Great idea! Would definitely like to see more.
gitgit chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
ohh yea

that you need to turn into a two or three or a multichapter

i really hope bella is innocent in all of this

that was an awesome first chapter!
Sup.Sarah chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
More more more! Please...
BiteMeECullen chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
That was an AWESOME story and I definitely want to know what happens next. And I love how you did the NCIS thing with the hard ass boss, the tough as nails partner, and the womanizer. Its like Gibbs, Tony, and Ziva in a whole new (better) light! Haha poor McGee... Anyway, Ya, loved your story!
sauerkraut chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
really like "very special agent" ncisward and the whole concept, since i'm also a huge ncis fan. i think this story would work even better as a full-fledged story giving the characters and the tension between e & b more space and time to develop. or maybe i'm just being greedy... lol
bspest04 chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
oh please, definitely continue this story. so freaking good. I kept waiting for bella to actually be evil and tie him to the bed so she could make her escape. You are definitely NOT DONE with this story :)
WallaWallaMama chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Yes, please - more!
RingTheBella chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
I for one would definitely read it if you lengthened this. It was great.
artemisx07 chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
I would absolutely love for this to be extended :)
nicole1962 chapter 1 . 2/10/2010
lol very good job:)
Edward's Life chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
I would so love to hear more! Of course any kind of Edward is totally hot. But I also love the show NCIS. So an NCIS Edward is even hotter.

Hope to hear more soon. I'd be ever so grateful. Thank you.

I am,

Edward's Life
Caitiee SomeoneRescueMe chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Mini story!(:

T'was amazingg.3
plummpumpkin chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Oh, C'mon!

I gotta know what happens! Plus I want to see some Edward/Jake smack downs!

NCISward is super hot and I vote for a mini story.
Toasted Coconut chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Can't wait to read what is coming next:)
guccisassy chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Loved it!
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