Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan
eddi chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
edward well and truly fucked!
Rachel chapter 1 . 2/8/2010
Great story! I hope u do continue this! I loved it!
mjrtweety chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Loved this story. Please continue. I want to know If Jacob and Bella are guilty.
hol119 chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Gah - loved it! Please please please continue. Your Fedward is hot.
TwiBrit chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
I love it! I would really like to see where this would go.
jennyap chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
that was super HOT - gr8 story, plz give us more!
LaTiDo chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
god this was good. you got to at least do a three shot or something.
andiloveyou5 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
deff. more. longer, please.! :)
disuez chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
this would be a great story but gotta say hate the POV
twilightlover1901 chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
I want to know what happens! Write more of this please!
TeacupHero chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
why couldn't bella just leave the police station? they can't hold her there unless she's under arrest.

good story though :)
eyesonfire-rp chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
turn this into a 2 or 3 shot. i'd definitely read it. well written and interesting concept.
lemonhead chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
I really hope you continue this story because what you have written so far is outstanding!
EbonyHearts chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Story alert... just in caseys.
jancamc chapter 1 . 1/24/2010
lo ved like more
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