|Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan|
| xCrazyKindOvWeirdx chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
i hope this does well in the competition, its amazing :)
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| Sdjk chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
I have to know what happens! Please continue. Great idea and writing for a one-shot.
| JillyReb chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Loved the story, Luna! I would love to see it turn into a mini story! You know, have Jacob come back & Edward have to go all protective & save Bella! hehe :-)
| missjessxoxo chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
Loved it and would love to know what happens next ;)
| Sarah chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I really like this, Im a fan of NCIS to, and Edward as a NCIS agent is just hot ;) Please write many many chapters!
| brittany86 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
that end was great
| amwine chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I love it and would love to have more of these two! Great job and good luck in the contest!
| edwardrocksmysocks chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
I really enjoyed this! I definitely would love to see more of it! Great work, good luck in the contest!
| neoearthqueen30 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
please add more!
| CarminMoon chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Oh this should SO be a mini-story! I loved it, and NCIS is one of my fave shows, it fits so well with this contest!
| labellaleigh chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I hope there will be more!
I loved it!
| sassygirl156 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Hell yes, like you even have to ask if we want more? Of course! Please and thank you!
| Snewman82 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
That was really good and I enjoyed reading it very much. This would make a fantastic story if you decided to continue it. Good luck in the contest.
| onesweetbell chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Liked it and added it to fave just incase you add more to it.
| renamac chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Nice! I hate O/S that have a plot and then don;t answer the questions hey pose. Please continue this after the contest. It's awesome