Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan
labellaleigh chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I hope there will be more!

I loved it!

sassygirl156 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Hell yes, like you even have to ask if we want more? Of course! Please and thank you!
Snewman82 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
That was really good and I enjoyed reading it very much. This would make a fantastic story if you decided to continue it. Good luck in the contest.
onesweetbell chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Liked it and added it to fave just incase you add more to it.
renamac chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Nice! I hate O/S that have a plot and then don;t answer the questions hey pose. Please continue this after the contest. It's awesome
nowforruin chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I can't decide if I believe Bella or not that she knows nothing about the arms ring...

I'd love to see you expand it )
MagicBliss chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Ah hell! SO FREAKING HOT! Just...WOW! I will read whatever you decide to write. More please!
Kendall94 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
yes edward is so fucked in both ways! lol
sunfire04 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Great story. good luck in the contest.
InLoveWithEC chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Very very good! I love NCIS!
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
too cute...of course we want to see what happens...go for it!

secamimom chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I loved it! And I would definitely be interested in reading more of these two!
Silkie chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Ah now Luna of course you have to continue! that was fab
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
OMG i fricken loved it and of course i want to know whant happens. u could totally make this into an amazing story. jacob could kidnap bella or something and edward would save her and whatnot. u absolutely must continue, doing otherwise is not even an option!
ThuGoldenChild chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
This was awesome!

Def needs to be a next part...

Loved it!

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