Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan
renamac chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Nice! I hate O/S that have a plot and then don;t answer the questions hey pose. Please continue this after the contest. It's awesome
nowforruin chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I can't decide if I believe Bella or not that she knows nothing about the arms ring...

I'd love to see you expand it )
MagicBliss chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Ah hell! SO FREAKING HOT! Just...WOW! I will read whatever you decide to write. More please!
Kendall94 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
yes edward is so fucked in both ways! lol
sunfire04 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Great story. good luck in the contest.
InLoveWithEC chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Very very good! I love NCIS!
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
too cute...of course we want to see what happens...go for it!

secamimom chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I loved it! And I would definitely be interested in reading more of these two!
Silkie chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Ah now Luna of course you have to continue! that was fab
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
OMG i fricken loved it and of course i want to know whant happens. u could totally make this into an amazing story. jacob could kidnap bella or something and edward would save her and whatnot. u absolutely must continue, doing otherwise is not even an option!
ThuGoldenChild chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
This was awesome!

Def needs to be a next part...

Loved it!

twizzmom chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Ok I totally LOVED that. Pls continue it!
iamcarrieok chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
it's really great!

hope to see more chapters

your edward is interesting and kind of funny
SubtlePen chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
oh damn, bb. yes. more, please?

i was afraid when he dropped the holster she was gonna pull his own gun on him and out herself as a bad guy... but then we would never have gotten such a delicious lemon!
imjacksbrokenheart chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
Thank you for sharing your story. It is definitely intriguing. I would be interested in reading the resolution you have planned. I would like to see Edward put Jacob in jail and to know if Bella is just manipulating Edward to help Jacob. I have a hard time trusting Bella when she is sleeping with Jacob. If Bella is involved, does that mean Charlie is involved too, or just completely out of touch with what is going on with his daughter and her "sort of" boyfriend? I hope you choose to continue writing this story. Good luck in the contest!
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