Reviews for The Surveillance of Bella Swan
onesweetbell chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Liked it and added it to fave just incase you add more to it.
renamac chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Nice! I hate O/S that have a plot and then don;t answer the questions hey pose. Please continue this after the contest. It's awesome
nowforruin chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I can't decide if I believe Bella or not that she knows nothing about the arms ring...

I'd love to see you expand it )
MagicBliss chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Ah hell! SO FREAKING HOT! Just...WOW! I will read whatever you decide to write. More please!
Kendall94 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
yes edward is so fucked in both ways! lol
sunfire04 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Great story. good luck in the contest.
InLoveWithEC chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Very very good! I love NCIS!
DICATAKADD chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
too cute...of course we want to see what happens...go for it!

Thanks
secamimom chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I loved it! And I would definitely be interested in reading more of these two!
Silkie chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Ah now Luna of course you have to continue! that was fab
OPOSOJOJ chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
OMG i fricken loved it and of course i want to know whant happens. u could totally make this into an amazing story. jacob could kidnap bella or something and edward would save her and whatnot. u absolutely must continue, doing otherwise is not even an option!
ThuGoldenChild chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
This was awesome!

Def needs to be a next part...

Loved it!

~mw~
twizzmom chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Ok I totally LOVED that. Pls continue it!
iamcarrieok chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
it's really great!

hope to see more chapters

your edward is interesting and kind of funny
SubtlePen chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
oh damn, bb. yes. more, please?

i was afraid when he dropped the holster she was gonna pull his own gun on him and out herself as a bad guy... but then we would never have gotten such a delicious lemon!
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