|Reviews for Lost|
| Hikari Nova chapter 15 . 6/19
so when will the sequel be released? it's been over a year and a half since this was finished
| Difdi chapter 8 . 5/27
The solution of what to do about a conspiracy in Starfleet is fairly obvious.
Galaxy class ships are multi-role vessels, and one of those roles is flagship. As a result, a Galaxy class communications system is ridiculously powerful by the standards of most Federation starships.
Solution? Don't report the problem to anyone. Broadcast it to EVERYONE. Sunshine kills conspiracies dead.
| Difdi chapter 4 . 5/27
Technical error. Troi's empathy is a passive sense, not an active scan. Harry wouldn't be able to sense it or feel pain from it any more than he would from Picard merely looking at him.
Well, unless Harry is telepathic and bounced off Troi's mental shielding while unknowingly attacking HER.
| Difdi chapter 3 . 5/27
You have a minor technical error. You really should specify the class of ship the Kaveth Nar is - merely saying Bird of Prey is a bit like saying shuttle or truck. It's a type of ship, not a ship class in itself. A Klingon Bird of Prey is a raiding vessel, not a front line combatant like a battlecruiser.
It's pretty obvious to me that your story features a K'Vort class, but someone less trek-nerdy might be confused because the B'Rel class is also a Bird of Prey, and it's a Runabout-size scoutship with a crew of 6-12.
| Difdi chapter 1 . 5/27
You have a technical error. Romulan warships do not use antimatter for fuel, so there wouldn't be an antimatter explosion from shooting the ship.
On the other hand, what they do use for main power is also quite volatile if you shove a disruptor beam into it. The ship just implodes into subspace, rather than explodes into an antimatter-driven fireball.
| kyoshi711 chapter 15 . 5/21
Great story one of the best that I've read. Wish you could write a dozen more!
| Lina03 chapter 15 . 3/10
very nice and i so love L'kor
| obliviated fan chapter 15 . 2/16
So where's the sequel? :)
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 15 . 2/13
Brilliant. Love how everything fit together. Lwaxana being the one to oust the Dork Lord was inspired. Hope the continuation comes soon, because I like it!
| Obsidius chapter 15 . 12/22/2015
Great Story. Loved it! Thank you!
| kyoshi711 chapter 15 . 12/10/2015
When are you going to start your new story called the Heirs of Magic.
| Darkcrest27 chapter 6 . 11/16/2015
only complaint is that if harry and Sirius went through the veil together it was before harry could learn sectumsempra
| thedad1961 chapter 15 . 4/11/2015
Dud I enjoyed the story greatly, and wait the next installment with much eagerness.
| misherukuro chapter 15 . 3/14/2015
Interesting read. ,
| hpf2114 chapter 15 . 1/9/2015
Absolutely EXCELLENT story. Well written, enough good action sections to keep it interesting, with great interaction between characters. I look forward to the next story. Full marks!