Reviews for Love At First Punch
lunachand chapter 1 . 4/21
Haha this was a fun read. I love how you write!
woofyy chapter 1 . 3/16
Nice story. Good luckies with your future stories.
i love okikagu chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
hahaha so funny!
hahaaha cutee!
i love the way they had their dates!
kagura even get the hobby of sougo to kill hijikata..what a great couple sougo and kagura are!
thanks for this beautiful fic!
is perfect! XD
freyja0taku chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
hahah.. It's cute.. :3
Los Grotos chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
Ohmigod. This was too precious for this world.
Kiran-chan chapter 1 . 1/18/2014
Aww... It's a family full of spawns of Satan!
Mirimo27 chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
"I think I'm going to marry her," Okita says suddenly. I can totally see Okita falling for Kagura the very moment she says she'll help poison Hijikata to death, haha. XDDD Funny one-shot! Love these two.
Elixiria chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
lol this is hilarious
Frog-kun chapter 1 . 5/31/2013
LOL. Not even a fan of the pairing and this made me grin. You're officially a cool person.
Bloody masterpeace chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Super cute and funny loved it
blueberry761 chapter 1 . 8/5/2012
So cute!
Silvermoon34 chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Oh, Sougo, you and your happy little dream world of doom and hell, with Kagura at your side. Oh man, I'd hate to be in Edo when they had kids. *shivers* great writing, by the way. Please do write a sequel!
dragoniall chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
{"Okita smiles as he thinks of a future – teaching his baby to wield his first rocket launcher at uncle Hijikata's head while Kagura looks on, proud that her little darling is about to get its first headshot."}

aww! cute little ending! / :")
concerned anon 101 chapter 1 . 3/17/2011

I loved how it's narrated in an unorthodox style. There's something about it that is just perfect for a one-shot. I wasn't left hanging and missing something. It was just plain perfection.

I liked these lines:

"I think I'm going to marry her," Okita says suddenly.

"If you can survive, I might think about it," Kagura replies.

I can totally see this in the upcoming Gintama series XD

Also, I just want to say that there were minor corrections on words and grammar, but I completely discarded it after realizing how amazing your idea and narration was. HAHA. :))))

Please continue writing!

From your neighborhood anon :)

P.S. please write more Okita x Kagura stories :D
potsugi-deactivated chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
Waaahaa~~ So good! so fucking good! I laughed all along :3 now I can die and rest in peace (?)

I'm pretty sure, within all the OkiKagu fics I have read, this is my favorite! hell, yeah!
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