|Reviews for Cutting Loose|
| Harlequin de Rustre chapter 1 . 9/16
The characters seem to like running their mouths. Apart from overstated emotes, it’s a little hard to get a feel for what personality you’re aiming for. Every action comes off as blatantly pushing the narrative in a direction.
I like the general premise, but it’s too wooden for me to reread...
| Guest chapter 6 . 3/17
Gonna step back from this for a bit. I'm getting to angry that Naruto just needs to suck it up and move on. I get it but I really want to see others admit to have had a hand in those things that happen to him then presenting the "What're you gonna do about it?" Instead of "What does it matter? Gonna whine about it? Think this is a special case? Suck it up." Too evasive and he rolls over so easy like, you right you shouldn't told me about that one thing that makes up my whole existence because I for sure would've told or have been even more angry at the villagers. He's like a nicely trained pup after years of abuse have gone by. "Yes, master! I shouldn't whine for my lack of water because i can't do anything about it anyway. You're right!" It's like throwing him to the wolves and scolding him when he gets bit. We all know he should've been told and if their was any kind of non-political relationship between the hokage and naruto then it would have been eady to make him keep his mouth shut. All he needed to say was "Trust me." , "I'm sorry." , "I'm asking you as your grandfather, don't tell anyone you wouldn't trust with your life." And the kid would be putty in his hands because the only guy that talks to him is trusting him and saying he's family. I don't know, this scene just made me realize that Naruto truly was alone before Tenten. He didn't have the hokage, Iruka, and who knows about the people from the ramen stand.
| Optimistic chapter 1 . 1/1
I'm here at the aftermath, my ship sailed, the plot's calm before the storm, and there's a lighthearted ending.
Considering this appears to be discontinued/abandoned, I'm terrified of reading chapter 19 since chapter 18 ended on such a nice cutoff point. I don't wanna ruin that by getting some world shattered cliffhanger in 19 for a fic that likely won't be continued, so I think I'll call it quits here then.
I really hope you update the story one day though. If you do, I'm sure plenty of people will here to welcome you back.
| Katt chapter 19 . 12/28/2017
This story went to the crapper after Akatsuki left. You did us all a favour by giving it up
| Katt chapter 6 . 12/28/2017
I would've thought that fanfiction exists to correct the bigger crap original authors came up with in designing their characters. Why is this Naruto here still the idiotic head-in-the-clouds attention obsessed will-always-forgive-no-matter-what-is-done-to-him airhead that I had come to hate in the original story? This story is so irritating so far
| The Funny chapter 16 . 3/4/2017
Or bring in the bunny from the Monty Python and the Holy Grail movie, make it kisames pet and the hilarity will be very intense
| purplepunkgirl8 chapter 7 . 2/17/2017
| jcampbellohten chapter 4 . 1/31/2017
That's not the kind of conversation you just have out in the open, let alone yelling about it. They're still in the dining room or some kind of public space when the jinchuuriki business first comes up.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 19 . 1/24/2017
well this was interesting still it's sad for Sakura should be some good matches though
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 18 . 1/23/2017
well this was funny all running away and there together i wonder what will happen now with Sakura she is one of my fav characters i hope she gets stronger i guess Tenten's gonna enjoy fighting her now Ayame why did u do that
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 17 . 1/22/2017
wow this chapter was quite interesting poor Akane her ninja career is over before it really began. Sasgay got his ass handed to him of course that happened last chapter still always good to mention that. Not sure what to make of Maeko damn she's annoying but her Kekkai Genkai seems interesting. Loved the NaruTen arguing and Maeko's comments about just snogging him. I love reading stories where Sakura is pretty cool in it plus i always like the pairing NaruSaku it is my fav after all. Plus she did confess to liking him. Whoever Naruto end up with NaruSaku or NaruTen it will be cool.
I'm wondering if NaruSaku get together will Tenten get totally jealous or will it become a love triangle he already admitted to Sakura he used to have a crush on her. I hope Sakura gets stronger also.
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 16 . 1/21/2017
well that was nice chapter and sweet double team move and honorable what Naruto did and is Sakura starting to like Naruto i wonder i do love NaruSaku afterall
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 15 . 1/21/2017
well this sure was different Sakura's lost her respect for Sasgay and Itachi and Kisame are kicking ass and 2 annoying girls are out of the fight interesting
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 14 . 1/21/2017
well this was interesting Sakura's not such bitch and she respects Naruto. Well teaming up was strange i guess it's cool Maeko needs to die she's beyond annoying even Neji is quite cool in this story. Now Itachi's here what does that vagabond want
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 13 . 1/21/2017
well i must say another intriguing chapter enter Yugito again although she's kind of funny in her own way still interesting