Reviews for Cutting Loose
Kingkong101 chapter 19 . 7/26
Guest chapter 5 . 6/16
7 gates gai would beat bee and 8 gates would solo kumo
Guest chapter 17 . 5/24
The Forrest of death was very disappointing
Keisuke-Sama chapter 1 . 4/4
reread this multiple times over the years
Keisuke-Sama chapter 1 . 4/4
the best written fic in all of existence
Diametrik chapter 7 . 3/26
I can't keep reading. The overall story is very good and the writing is done well, but there's somehow something in every chapter that manages to annoy me enough to consider dropping it. Well, by themselves, they weren't enough to make me actually go through with dropping it, but when there's one in each chapter, it adds up.
Diametrik chapter 6 . 3/26
If Yugito says she bears full responsibility, then Konoha should actually make her bear full responsibility, Hizashi style. If Kumo can make Konoha do it, then Konoha should be able to make Kumo do it.

Also, the Hokage's explanation of keeping the secret and his method being better than Kumo's is full of shit.
Diametrik chapter 5 . 3/25
[She's probably expecting me to go back to the village, the only other option would be to cross the border into Kumo, and that's a pretty risky move.]

He specifically ran to the Konoha side of the inn, so why would continuing to run in that direction lead to kumo?

Also, I really thought that there was going to be another layer to his escape plan when he decided to stick around and fight Yugito directly after tricking her to the river, but no... his master plan to escape her was to bait her into going to the place he actually was...
Diametrik chapter 4 . 3/25
[ and the Raikage made it very clear he didn't want this mission ending with a bunch of dead Konoha ninjas; we don't need more trouble with them right now.]

But kidnapping the kyuubi jinchuuriki is fine?
Diametrik chapter 3 . 3/25
The fact that KKumo knows Naruto is a Jinchurriki kinda invalidates the entire reason for him not knowing about it. Maybe you'll explain next chapter...
Guest chapter 19 . 1/5
I know its been over ten years but pls update
Acacia Vix chapter 4 . 4/25/2022
How the hell does Kumo even know that Naruto's a jinchuriki? It's supposed to be an S-rank secret in Konoha, punishable by death if you even talk about it. How would they have learned about it? Konoha's security can't be that terrible.
Aedwards179 chapter 2 . 3/18/2022
I've never seen a fic with kakashi meeting one of the teams he failed. that was great
Vixen chapter 7 . 3/4/2022
One of my top 3 what if's I've ever read currently
ARmindset chapter 6 . 2/15/2022
Guys I found out what tenten parents names are it's-
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