Reviews for Cutting Loose
jtcr chapter 13 . 6/29/2012
poor lee he is feling left out.
jtcr chapter 12 . 6/29/2012
Nah, I only eat girls' souls when they're brunettes or redheads
his teammate is a brunnette

I really liked this chapter, it was very good. keep up the good work
jtcr chapter 11 . 6/29/2012
question: why didnt a chidori through the shoulder snap yagura pout of the genjustu
jtcr chapter 10 . 6/29/2012
i look forward to the next fight scene of this well written story
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Hey there. i was wondering when you were planning on bringing out chapter 20 of cutting loose . i really love the story and have been waiting awhile.
jtcr chapter 9 . 6/28/2012
jtcr chapter 8 . 6/28/2012
naruto is turning into gai

dang, was kinda hoping that naruto wouldnt go crazy oh well stil a good cha[
jtcr chapter 7 . 6/28/2012
i greatly enjoy this fic, is awesome. my prediction, lee and tenten are gonna follow narutos gr0oup
jtcr chapter 6 . 6/28/2012
naruto, too selfless for his own good. well this is a good story and very well written. i shall give it a few more chapters and i shall see about adding it to my communitie
jtcr chapter 5 . 6/28/2012
well. that was a bad fight. i mean im not trying to flame or anything, but tenten shouldnt have lasted long at all against yugito. a writers big problem is that they overpower some and underpower others
jtcr chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
yugito launched a shuriken at naruto, but wen tenten entered yugitos room she found a kunai sticking out of the wood
jtcr chapter 3 . 6/28/2012
thats right. naruto aint fail the last time so. oh nooooose this is gonna suck. but a nice plot twist
jtcr chapter 2 . 6/28/2012
theres another one. i actually had hopes that lee wouldnt end up like gai because of how late they met. but i was mistaken. ah well. a very good chapter extremely well written
jtcr chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
they are training to be ninja, theres no such thing as a fair fight or cheap shots. how come i come across this in every story?

i liked sakura getting pranked it was funny
xbox432 chapter 19 . 6/14/2012
There are a few typos in this story, most commonly words being repeated or seeming like the author decided to word the sentence differently halfway through. However, considering the length of the story and the overall quality of the work those typos can be easily overlooked.

I must say that the emotional dynamics of the characters, especially Naruto and Tenten, are both plausible considering their personalities as well as being quite refreshing, notably that the female protagonists are not portrayed as being inherently inferior to the males.

Its sad that its been so long without an update on this fic, it is most definitely one the most interesting I've found, and can only hope that the Author one day continues with this masterpiece.

That being said, if you ever need an editor to proof read a new chapter for you I'd be more than happy to help.
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