Reviews for Cutting Loose
winterzstorm chapter 19 . 11/17/2014
I love this story can't wait for more, the character development is awesome
Biblio388 chapter 19 . 11/11/2014
Like what you are doing with the whole story. Very interesting approach to a lot of the overused situations that appear in most other stories.
Biblio388 chapter 15 . 11/11/2014
Talk about a shock. Didn't see this chapter coming but it was very well done.
Biblio388 chapter 13 . 11/11/2014
Noticed the meaning behind the name and have to admit that it was funny. Just makes me laugh to think about the interactions on Neji's team.
Biblio388 chapter 11 . 11/11/2014
Very cool chapter. Like what you did with a lot of the canon stuff getting changed. Always interesting to see differences between how things turn out in each arc. Also like what you did with Yagura since I haven't seen it handled that way before. How he reacted and what happened at the end were particularly nice touches.
Biblio388 chapter 5 . 11/11/2014
Enjoyed how realistic you decided to male that. I have seen a lot of stories where something extreme would have resulted from that fight rather than her making decisions like a ninja should. Killing him or going into a huge destructive battle are extremely poor shinobi tactical decisions, especially when the missions objective is taken into account. Definitely liked how you did it.
Biblio388 chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
Intriguing way to play that.
lyssipe chapter 19 . 10/26/2014
I really like this story- you've managed to make Naruto stronger reasonably without over-powering him. Do you intend to update any time? I (and probably others) would enjoy that, though in no way do I assume that I can or should pressure you to write what you don't feel like. (You are not a vending machine I can shake and hit into freeing up my drink, and this story is batter than any lame soda ;) )
Guest chapter 19 . 10/21/2014
Great story, I hope you revive it some day!
Guest chapter 13 . 10/19/2014
Lee is kinda underpowered, he still has internal chakra right? That's how he uses the 8 gates and wall/water walks. Why can't he just learn chakra control to be like tsunade and boost his strength? It might be hard as hell but lee wouldn't give up and if he begged could Get Tsunade to train him no problem. Then, at that rate with the right control unleashing 1 gate would be like unleashing 5 with no drawbacks and 8 gates wouldn't kill him but make him godlike. Its also not like its super easy for him to do so it gives him a good lifetime goal and stops you from having to be too creative with his character development as far as strength goes. It also lets him stay a challenge to Naruto which is enjoyable. Plus, I'd really love to see it happen. Please lol.
Jose19 chapter 5 . 9/28/2014
This chapter showed realistically how much Naruto has to train for him to reach the level that he wants and but the reaction of TenTen is something that could happen if she was told of this secret so early on her career.
Jose19 chapter 4 . 9/28/2014
I agree with Gai being a good person for Naruto to get training and Naruto is learning a education that you can't trust anybody even if he or she seems to be a ally.
Jose19 chapter 3 . 9/28/2014
I do hope that you pair up TenTen with Naruto because they fit well together and I want to know what is the deal with Yugito being here because Kumo is not a friend of Konoha during this time.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 9/28/2014
I just hope not to see Naruto in those Green Jumpsuits that is a scary thought for anyone to see but I have one question does Naruto learn the Shadow Clone Jutsu because it is vital for him as much as learning the Rasengan.

I always did wanted to see how Naruto would fare being taught by Maito but I do like Maito Guy he is eccentric but you can't hate the guy.
Drew86419 chapter 3 . 9/10/2014
I seriously had trouble reading these first few chapters, I mean who wants to read about a pretty much worse than cannon idiotic naruto in some aspects. If it doesn't change soon ill probably leave this story. Not trying to be mean i just don't like dumb naruto fanfiction.
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