Reviews for The Taking of Mac Taylor
CSI Bethany chapter 2 . 7/31/2013
Love how you have done the main characters POV. But I know that the characters wouldn't say this stuff how you have written them. And it also seems rushed.
CSI Bethany chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I like the letter but it could do with a bit more detail on how people are reacting and how people react to the letter.
LilDevyl chapter 8 . 5/13/2010
Not bad. What's wrong with Sid? Is Live Like You were Dying going to tell us what's wrong with Sid or is that a start of a possible new virus or something? Let me know plz
KingsIndian chapter 8 . 5/13/2010
Nice way to finish the story off! It doesn't really matter that it's short.
KingsIndian chapter 7 . 5/13/2010
Wow - a pretty nice piece of work! Just the epilogue to go now.
TheGallifreyanAtheist chapter 6 . 3/11/2010
i would love for you to finish this story it is really cool
KingsIndian chapter 6 . 3/6/2010
I love it! This is turning into a great story.
KingsIndian chapter 5 . 3/3/2010
This was great...I love how you portrayed the characters here!

Oh, yeah, the title's good too.
KingsIndian chapter 4 . 2/3/2010
Wow - I know these chapters are short, but you manage to pack a lot into them! This seems to be a very intense story.

Keep it up!
KingsIndian chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
Even though it's short, I still like it: quality over quantity!

Anyway, it's getting late now, so I'll read chapter 4 tomorrow.
KingsIndian chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
Great start to the story; this looks really promising. I like how you've left it at a real cliffhanger; I just want to read more!