|Reviews for Coming Home|
| moon so bright chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
I love this couple.
| Dn chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
Every time I read it I love it even more... Thank you soooo much for sharing this!
| Firefly8762 chapter 1 . 10/15/2011
Minachan: *raises eyebrows* That's it? No more?
Plagnister: *sighs tiredly* What is it that you're complaining about now?
"Minachan: *wails* Where's the X-scene? This light and fluffy stuff is frusterating Minachan!
Plagnister: *shakes head* Haven't you ever learned to slow down and enjoy the sweets in life?
Minachan: *cocks head* Sweets in life?
Plagnister: *half smirks* Yes, sweets in life. The story was a very sweet one. You have to learned to enjoy the sweets, cuz if all there was, was slam-bam-wham thankyou ma'am, the world would be a boring place.
Minachan: *taps one claw against teeth, nods once thoughtfully* Yes... yes Mina guesses your right. It was a very sweet and fluffy story.
| Smayz chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Mmmm, so relaxing.
| jay chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
WOW me likey... wonder whats next ;)
| Passerby-A chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Oh, this has a sort of domestic feel to it, well, as domestic as a sexy vampire and a crazy witch could get. I liked the way the seemingly senseless small talk leads to the light teasing at the end, and that you've made a Ivy considerate girlfriend instead of an insatiable lover. I was hoping for some action, though... hahaha! P
I think because dialogue focuses on small talk and some light banter, it gives the fic a very household feel. And that you inserted some imagery every once so often, I can easily imagine a lazy afternoon with the two of them snoozing on the couch together. The last part of the shot tied it off pretty well, and we see some unexpected wisdom from Rachel P
Thanks for this shot, it's very well done and I hope that you'll continue with the good work! Cheers D
| visiblestar chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
I actually nearly jumped out of my seat when I saw an email alert for one of your stories! Im so happy that you wrote more Ivy/Rachel! As with everything you write this was just perfect. It was lovely to read some non angsty Ivy/Rachel. I love how sweet they are cuddling up together. Such a perfect pair. If only the Rachel in the books would stop being so dumb. She doesnt know what shes missing. Ivy cuddles have got to be the best thing ever! Please write more Ivy/Rachel soon! :D
| Teresa Kaiju chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
A sweetly enjoyable moment...
| Kay8abc chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Very sweet. I like the brief window into a day with our favorite couple.
| 1711AdvenaAvis chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Awesome job !
| Palistus chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
that was a nice one, sweet and short. Perfect for a quick fluffy read :)
| retratserif chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Wonderful Ravy fluff makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. There definitely needs to be more of it
| Evilyuriclone chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Thanks for this, every time I read a little bit of non angst- ridden Rachel/Ivy domesticity it fans my hopes that they will get together in the end. I really think it's what they deserve, and it makes me so nervous that it's all still up in the air.
It really brightened my day, again, thank you.
| K'sChoiceofAFI chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
So warm and fluffy. I love the lighter side of Ravy. Great story.
| DreamShadower chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Some more great writing as usual. It's nice to see their fluff with that little bit of zest of spice.