Reviews for Lil' Slugger Underground
youngwriter123 chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
Wow, I'm the first reviewer? Well this story was short but cute. Sadly, I didn't full understand it to it's extent!... But I still liked how it flowed. For just a tad criticism, add a little bit more to a one-shot. Audiences love a full picture :)

But either way this was a well flowing story!