Reviews for The Game
Saubree chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
Oh dude, but why would you do that?
No matter, this is lovely and I'm in love, thanks for writing it :)
Quanna chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
Really good fic, read it while listening to 'This is Gallifrey' on the series 3 soundtrack. It adds another dimension to this story.

I like the dynamic in this, and the different point of view this story takes from most of the other fics.

Keep going!
Kabooshka chapter 1 . 6/1/2011

poor koschei and theta :(

oh well this is a different spin to what i usually read about the two timelords.

usually it has them hating each other becus they love each other so much. I quite like this way though- it explains their hatred in a more logical way. I also really liked the way you talked to the reader- i felt like i was insignificant compared to the timelords and the story but it also makes th ereader feel special due to them having the privilage of being told the story.

Keep writing- and yes i was trying to look for demons and got distracted *guilty* hehe
bran4ever chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
I love this perspective on their story, or rather, their non-story. "The Game got tired and left." That line will always haunt me. It fits so perfectly. I really loved this piece.
Hayley-Saxon-xx chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
Wow, i really like this. Brilliantly written too :)

Jess x
WeepingAngel123 chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
Really good stuff!

The end line was just perfectomundo too. You summed their "relationship" up very naiicely: 'They are merely the last two of an extinct race, trapped in an endless dance of futility, which will always end the same, because the Game got tired, and left.'

StarKid McFly chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
this is good! I like the wise tone of the narrative. The story is written well, and you ended it perfectly. :)
RachelClaire chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I haven't seen the old school Doctor Who but I really like what you've done here, whether it's true to canon or not. The voice you have for the narrator is great, I especially love when he inserts his own opinions, like he's actually speaking to you. I like the way it's as if you're telling it to a small child as well. And the image of the Game is good, I like that...
Son of Whitebeard chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
This very interesting take on the Masters relationship

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NZcalling chapter 1 . 1/13/2010
I think this is a different style to the fics of yours that I've read before, and I think that the different perspective you use to tell it proves to be very effective(with my favourite line probably being "He was now a wanted man. Why? Because he had kidnapped someone, you stupid child. And that is wrong.") lol.

I like the way you told their history before they became the Doctor and the Master, and how they lost their names. Not having seen the classic series I don't know if it's true relating to canon or not, but hey, it's good whatever way xD. Well done.