|Reviews for Beyond the Illusion|
| Namei chapter 2 . 7/25
if there was another way to give this story more reviews, i would...
Also. It makes so much for sense for there to be more ramifications for the bus incident. The show played it off as a joke that was soon forgotten, but man did you hit it home with the pain meds and Ted's PTSD level of guilt.
| Namei chapter 1 . 7/25
...everything is so beautifully heartbreaking. Yes absolutely yes
| jo chapter 1 . 7/25
STOP MAKING ME CRY
| jo chapter 2 . 7/25
| Darth Becky 726 chapter 2 . 7/12
But what about James? Lily called him but no one even mentioned him again. I'd want to know if my younger brother was hit by a bus, and I don't even have a brother!
| oo Countess D oo chapter 2 . 10/6/2016
Great writing and very in character! Keep writing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2015
Yeah, so, this never happened, don't care what you say, cause this never happened, and Ted would never do that, because you got it all wrong, doesn't matter if it's fanfiction, because this isn't how it happened and you're a stupid idiot.
| cantwebeseventeen chapter 2 . 5/2/2015
| dreamer 3097 chapter 2 . 10/19/2014
A good story
| Clickydowiz chapter 2 . 8/3/2014
I loved it it realy added the missing moments from these scenes. It was simply fantastic and I look forword to reading more of your work in the future.
| Lily-Magnolia chapter 2 . 10/20/2013
When I first watched the episode, I cried myself to a sniveling mess when Barney and Ted embraced and declared brothers. Barney is many things, indeed he is one twisted soul but he is damn loyal to the core to his friends especially Ted, he does not care about spending endless money on his beloved friends and he craves for approval and attention from Ted because he has abandonment issues thanks to his childhood.
I was beyond pissed when Ted simply broke their friendship off like that, and to think that Ted was already going after Stella so steadily, and the fact that he only punished Barney instead of Robin as well, painted Ted as a blatant selfish man, an idiot who cares less about the true meaning of brotherhood. Ted does not deserve Barney's loyalty. It's a pity really.
And the fact that you addressed every single thing that I felt regarding the (real) accident and how Lily was pissed at Ted as well, once again turned me into a blubbering sobbing mess. Thank you for capturing such strong emotions. Brilliant.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
I cried. This was amazing.
| La Salamandre chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
*sigh* He's not dead ! :D It was really touching I really enjoyed your fic and I was wondering if I could translate it in french, please ? That would be really nice from you :-)
| La Salamandre chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
Oh no, poor Barney T.T
Ted has been a jerk !
Nice idea ! :)
| Noktis chapter 2 . 2/14/2013
Loved it! this story actually makes more sense than the episode... to me, at least.