Reviews for Giving In
Canadian lamp chapter 40 . 3/18
Happiness, that ending there made me hecka happy, the last part was totally rad. I also really liked the rest of the story too, it was very unique and interesting, which was pretty cool, thank you for writing
TiWrench chapter 11 . 3/14
In Canada, you have to be 18 to drink, love. Canada would not think of it as 21.

Sorry to bug you but this (proud) Canadian wanted to try and help.
GilZeAwesomePrussia chapter 29 . 1/24
GilZeAwesomePrussia chapter 28 . 1/24
*is falcon punched into oblivion* NOOOOOOOOTTTTTT AWESOOOOOMMMMEEE
2manyteeth chapter 19 . 1/20
Hello, I speak (Quebecois) French and in the Lumière: Light chapter, I wanted to point out that "I miss you" in French is not really "Je te manques" but rather "tu me manques" as in, you are missing from me. Great story, it's my second time reading through and I am just as captivated! I know it's been a long time since you wrote this but a few chapters back, you mentioned publishing this book and selling it... I would absolutely buy it if it's still available/happening; when/where could I buy it?
IpiuGate chapter 26 . 12/27/2016
It's "Vas te faire foutre" rather than "Vas chier" in equivalent terms, although it doesn't really allow for the misunderstanding
IpiuGate chapter 10 . 12/27/2016
Canada isn't obssessed with pancakes the same way fanfiction writers are NOT obssessed with their sjips and fandoms. I love it this whole thing is brilliant, however the french sometimes has gender mistakes because of the neutral gender in english
Thebluetrainstation chapter 40 . 11/4/2016
This was a great story. It was apparent how much time and effort you put into writing this. I'm glad for the slow, careful buildup as it made Canada and Russia's relationship more believable and commited. Thank you for writing this.
Fangdomgirl chapter 40 . 11/2/2016
I love this book and hate to see it end demanding at least a second book and many spin off one shots involving the two or other parings
Your writing is phenomenal! But I noticed quite a few times where your sentence structure and certain words were off ,I suggest you check over your work as well as one or two other people if possible as these things can be easy to miss but easily inconvenienced the flow of such a great story
I had expected and hoped for this to be a little darker as you took great care going into details so I was greatly disappointed and at times even confused with the way you chose to skim over such important and vital details to the story line and character build
It took me meer days to read this ,doing so every chance I got but finding it hard to understand sometimes as it required quite a bit of concentration due to sentence structures or details that seemed to be misplaced or skipped
Other then having to scroll to the bottom of the page to find a translation that was not always there ,I suggest putting brackets with a translation instead to make it easier and more enjoyable to read
Overall I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and following it along ,I haven't made such a long post of feedback and praise in a long time and am ecstatic to do so for this book feeling that you will take this as a good thing as you definitely deserve such praise
For my last part before this ends I would just like to say I hope you keep writing such wonderful things in the future and am not afraid to delve into the more gory details scared of others opinions

(Afterthought: it seemed you shied away from writing rape (and anything to gory) in even though it was quite clear you had set his character up to do so ,I worry that you appear to take in public opinion to much changing characters actions and making major things such as what happen with the knife merely a confusing afterthought (hence having less impact) ,I wish to give you some advice here please don't allow the pressure to get to you ,this story was wonderful but hard to read in obvious parts where character changes and abnormalities where made to please less full on audiences, it affected the quality of your story to have such things and made some parts less effecting then they should have been ,I also believe this largely made you overlook a lot of untapped potential in characters and there dynamic, although this story is not beyond retribution and is in no way horrible ,you seemed to try and rush the last few chapters seeming almost unsure of yourself and how you would end it in the given 40 chapters although the ending was in no way disappointing ,it could have been different and perhaps better but it still flowed well as an ending ,overall you made a great book despite obvious pressure from outside influence and I would happily recommend this or read it again)

I'm going to move on to your other works now hoping that your wonderful way of writing continues unrestrained from public opinion and oppression and flowing as beautifully as your stories seem to
busty-cutie chapter 36 . 10/31/2016
aw matthew haven't being having his family momemts that often
busty-cutie chapter 33 . 10/25/2016
He wasn't raped but prepared
I thought the author just left it as a implication
busty-cutie chapter 32 . 10/25/2016
Aw vera and Italy are getting along
Ooooo matt x ivan right there
Poor Mattie getting raped ;-;
Hes taking this surprisingly well considering he only did it once
busty-cutie chapter 31 . 10/24/2016
Aww ruscan
Too bad dimitri is going to ruin it
busty-cutie chapter 30 . 10/24/2016
Aw dimitri is a little broken too
Yes matthew is saved
busty-cutie chapter 29 . 10/23/2016
Wow that nation part was a shocker
Omg mattie was soooo close to him
The story just keeps getting better
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