|Reviews for perpendicular lines|
| KrayKrayKat chapter 1 . 7/5
Damn they so deserved their 10 times better, their 100 times better! Any universe they're together, I'll take it!
I would have liked more detail on how Yoko died and what happened after that.
| Walis chapter 1 . 4/2
I absolutely adore this.
| limonium chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
nice, new and creative
| Lushi chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
this is great so far! very clever and intriguing. update soon!
| rikary chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
Ouch. I really feel sorry for them. :') Too bittersweet.
The last line :
One always dies.
You stabbed me twice. Damn you.
| Arora HickoryEye chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
:DDD seriously, I enjoy your stuff a little bit too much
| Hearthem chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
It's very interesting to think up what ifs. Simon with Kamina still around never would have taken the next step... it was sad when he didn't meet Nia.
| Knight of shadow chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
I have to say this is good but i want more. just a bit but more feels nessarcy. Other than that it is quite good.
| reeroy chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
Adore the idea of it, although I think you lost me on the last line. '
BUT! I have to say, characterization wise...this might have happened if Kamina didn't die. Simon would still be in the shadows...
Could you do more, please? Additions would be lovely. It'd make for a nice Alternate Universe drabble collection. 8D
| Naresome Hyakujuu chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
I kinda like this. The concept is great. I think if you cntinued to build on this idea, it would make a very great story
| Illulian chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
What a cute short story. There defiantly could be more to this, it has a lot going, ever thought of updating?
| GoodbyeCrimson chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Very interesting concept. :)
Though it's lovely, you might want to considered adding more detail.
| Vossago chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Very interesting concept. I'd like to see what happens next.