|Reviews for Craving Contact|
| garnmcgaughn chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Omg great story and really well layed out. Pilsbury fit in perfectly there. I had a feeling q might go overboard a tad heh. Makes you wonder about the day after or just that afternoon how they feel
| Smayz chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Haha, wow, what a way to inform the school.
| Whurmy chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I really liked this, quite a bit. (: The only thing I didn't like about it was the insane number of run on sentences. Each paragraph was more like a sentence or two with a lot of commas in each. Maybe get a Beta for future stories, or try your best to use less commas? Starting a new sentence can be kind of hard at first, but it gets easier the longer write.
All in all though, I did really like the story. The plot was great. (:
| umbrellaleg chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
| fromthebooth chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
i haven't read the entire fic, and probably will not.
your sentences are LONG. they go on and on and on.
| starophie chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
That was adorably hot )
| Calli Wall chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
| WinterAquair chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
is this story done... please don't be
| Billy Rose chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
What happened to the periods in this? There's just commas until the end of paragraphs... it's kind of irritating, not to mention distracting and a bit confusing - I'm not sure which are supposed to be commas and which aren't
You may want to go back through your fics and fix that because it brings what may be a quality fic down - if someone starts reading the fic but then sees commas galore they may decide it's a fic not worth reading or that they just can't deal with the commas and ditch it altogether
| Ian's-Grace47 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
Oh my god that was amazing! So sweet and so very very VERY hot! I love Quinn and Rachel and this was such a cute story. I loved it!
| kiyo028 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
A tad too much maybe, Quinn?
I was very entertained! :D
| breathe4her chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
What a way to 'come out' so to speak. I love that Quinn just had to do it the hardcore why. She doesn't peg me as subtle and you carried that well. I'm glad it was Emma that found them out of the faculty, I think she handled it as best she could.
Looking forward to more Faberry fics from you! This was so sweet with a mix of super sexy. PMS!
| NOTxINx2xLABELS chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Haha! Wow! That was amazing. I really liked this.