Reviews for Haven
CharmyPI-5 the VIII chapter 4 . 6/4/2016
Wait that priest, was that sasuke or shinobushi( not spelled right but whatever)
crazydbzfan87 chapter 4 . 11/22/2014
This...this is amazing. I absolutely love this story! Thank you, thank you so much for making it more than a one-shot! Wow, they were so in character and the plot was believable and, WOW! You just hit the nail on the head with this! Thanks for posting it, it was an awesome read! :D
colinaragonot logged in chapter 3 . 12/12/2010
Oh, yay! Happpy ending! By the way, words like anyone and eveyone are not hyphenated. I can't wait to read on!I was actually going to read you tohr story, but then saw that it was a seqel to this,and came here first. :D

colinaragonot logged in chapter 3 . 12/12/2010
answers! Yay! Gotta read on!

colinaragonot logged in chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
Ugh, still keeping me in the dak, huh? Geez...

Another amazing chapter. I also likd ow you kpt the everyday life smehwatnormal, insttead of just focusig on the pot itsel, like Splinter advising Don that marital arts is about improiving, not keeping up.

colinaragonot logged in chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Bad enough for what? Oh,no!

This was a really good beginning. The detail was good and your storytelling is superb. :)

Megan McAlistair chapter 4 . 10/4/2010
a b-line?

not bee-line as in... bee?

a nice open ending

as is expected of a very good and well-written short story such as this one

I love it
Megan McAlistair chapter 3 . 10/4/2010
"I'm still not convinced you're completely sane"


now I'm wondering why the turtles aren't coming withg him to fix this

they could sneak into the base, destroy the guns and be outta there again

but good chapter
Megan McAlistair chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
concerned Leo is concerned

still cute

and... a bit like green tea
Megan McAlistair chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
this was cute

in a very weird kind of way

not sure about the story yet...

but it sounds promising
quali chapter 4 . 5/25/2010
That was such a nice ending! It was sweet to see Leo so concernred over Usagi. _ I enjoyed reading it.
quali chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
I really like this so far. I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Jamocha101 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Well, Raph is definitley in character. :-)
lynzyb chapter 4 . 1/20/2010
Another fic, another chance for my to tell you how much I love your writing.

Your characters are spot on, some great interaction is protrayed here, especially between Usagi/Leo.

Fave part has to be Usagi getting all confused about who Superman is! If he'd have stuck around long enough I'm sure Mikey would have bored him to death with comic talk.

I felt this was a good length for this should write more 'multi-chapter' oneshots! :-p

Good stuff hun - looking forward to when inspiration hits you again and refuses to let go. :-)
54Viruses chapter 4 . 1/19/2010
“...You fret too much.”

Oy, Usagi-san, truer words were never said. XD

Anyways, I really enjoyed this, the concept was pretty simple but you did a wonderful job with the portrayal. However, I must admit, this is the second longest one-shot I've ever read. D
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