|Reviews for Phantom of the opera: The second generation|
| Lunarosa11 chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
thiis seems like its gonna be good!
| Croc's Angel chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
it's fine no grammar mistakes i could see and good job please update
| Denfehlath chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
| Lila Caffee chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
It's not bad. Try making the paragraphs shorter, and double check the quotations. Running this through a word-processor (spell-check) would definitely improve the mechanical aspect of it. And don't worry about flamers, they usually are very bad writers and no one likes them.
Oh, and if you have different sections of a chapter, try doing this '-'. If it creates a line across the page, select undo and you'll be fine. It really helps with my stories.