Reviews for Puppet
BrownEyesAngel chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
I really love this story, falling in love with this pairing.
YellowFlash67 chapter 1 . 7/17/2014
It's a cute one-shot. Now, I think you got their characterization right as well.
shschesschamp chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
very good story it shows them similarities
Galneryus chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
not bad for your early one-shot story really awesome. keep writing
Elizander chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
Well since ther's not to much to me to say that someone else has say already, i'll just get to the point that i really enjoy your story.

Simple, cute and dear. Just the way a one-shot romance fic is supose to be.
lachaveira chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
D'aw 3

That was so cute and sweet and made me grin like an idiot for several minutes. I am so so fond of these characters and since they surely share a lot of similarities, it's impossible for me not to ship them, haha. Definitely one of my favorite pairings and your fic is going straight to my faves.

My only small complaint is that Terra's characterization was a bit off in comparison to her FF6 self, but hey, since it's Dissidia what we are talking here that's really not a big deal. Didn't hinder my enjoyment of this one-shot :D

Please consider writing more about this pairing!
aviiieee chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
I think you did a very good job! 8D You captured Cloud and Terra's personalities quite well. I also like how you have the right amount of detail in describing what was happening in the story, how the characters delivered their lines/how they acted, etc. Keep it up! :D
Cloud Ex-SOLDIER chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
I'm finding myself liking the Cloud/Terra pairing more and more.

Description was very good and Cloud's personal demons were well written.

Good oneshot.
MonMonCandie chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
It's your first one-shot...but it's really good!

And I'm not exaggerating the "good" part either, I really, REALLY mean it!

This is challenging for you, but once you continue to write ideas like this it'll become easier! Seriously, you were able to convey a short story in such a limited amount of words. That says something!

I really enjoyed reading this. Both Cloud and Terra were in character and believable (for how they would act), and your writing style is descriptive and simple! :3 Honestly... I can't find words to describe this one-shot... IT WAS JUST SO CUTE! :D

The ending made me SQUE until the next day! XD Plus, you didn't immediately jump into the CloudxTerra moment! It was a gradual thing which I think could really fit between Cloud and Terra! I could totally imagine what their hug looked like in my head... -wink wink- XD

This is SO going into my favorites! You are getting really good at writing stories! I guess the longer story was like practice for writing a one-shot, ne? :D

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! I'll look forward to reading more of your stuff! -heart-
MinaDeville chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Loved it! So cute :3
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Well, that was dear. Terra and Cloud do have a lot of common ground in Dissidia, don't they? It must be why so many writers like to write Terra/Cloud romances.

The Kefka mannequin saying "Ahh, the smell of inexperience!" about Cloud's presence-just before Cloud beat it up-was pretty funny, but I can imagine a more sinister foe seeing them and jeering something like, "The puppet...and the slave. How romantic." Make of that what you will...