|Reviews for If Given A Chance|
| knightessjg chapter 2 . 11/2
Puppybo...*sigh* oh, Zack you goofball
| LoreilDarksky00 chapter 47 . 6/10
I just binge-read this and I could not be happier. I really, REALLY love this story; the plot, the way you portrayed the characters (very well done, btw), and your writing is just awesome! The only thing I see that could need improving is a couple places where the spelling isn't quite right (like, you're missing a letter or two at the end) but I'd really only suggest a second read-through, spell-check, and/or a beta reader.
The sequel sounds interesting! I wouldn't really know what title to vote for, though DX
Anyways, thank you for such a wonderful story and best of luck with the sequel!
| gypsyann chapter 47 . 5/12
ok, so I read the whole thing and it was very good :) I do hope you change your mind about the sequel :) again, thanks for a good story
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/3/2014
It's adorable k? Not adorible
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/6/2013
...wow, this is like the Official Moron Woobie Cloud Project or something. Bella Swan has more sense than him.
| The.darkness-in-our.hearts chapter 19 . 5/4/2013
Type your review for this chapter here...
| Onyxlight chapter 38 . 2/20/2013
Love it my dear I am so behind on this fic!
| Ka chapter 7 . 1/7/2013
A little fast, but okay. Also, adorable is spelled with two a's, not an a and an i.
| The Auric Healer chapter 47 . 10/11/2012
Can't go home is a bit strange, so I'd go for The next Cadet, if I were you. I adore the summary, by the way. Can't wait for the next one. If no one else have given any interest to be your partner, I wouldn't mind having your ideas bounced on me. Just sayin'.
| AwaiGenkaku chapter 5 . 7/19/2012
hehe! That was cute!
| AwaiGenkaku chapter 3 . 7/19/2012
omg the ending almost killed me! It was so funny that I cried a little. Then again, I've had insomnia for a few days so I'm pretty loopy due to fatigue and exhaustion.
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/17/2012
I like this chapter much better than the first two:) There were some issues with grammar, but the story itself is really good
| Roith and Lorette chapter 47 . 7/16/2012
Lorette: Don't call it the cadet one please. I dunno, but it seems that there's lots of stories that have the word Cadet in them... Plus I feel the other name matches more.
Okay, just so you know, this story has been in my bookmarks since, like, the 15th chapter, but I don't think I've ever added it to my favourites... I might have... But I can't really remember -.-...
So yeah, get that new story up here soon, please! I'm looking forward to it! Don't let me down here!
| Carabel chapter 47 . 5/31/2012
looking forward to the sequel
| Gryh chapter 47 . 5/24/2012
I really like this story and I look forward to the sequel. BTW I think "Can't Go Home" would be the better title of the two.
P.S. While I was typing this, "Unity" by Shinedown started playing on the radio and I thought I'd mention it 'cause it seems kind of fitting.