|Reviews for Unexplained connection|
| Nikki chapter 65 . 10/15
You've written a compelling story. However, I hate reading a story that is marked as "complete" which is actually not complete.
| Jeri252 chapter 65 . 9/7
| Annvonleo chapter 65 . 1/26
So I noticed there's in fact no sequel.
Damn girl... this story is so hot and complicated. Like oh my God! I would love to read some more!
I hope you are OK and all considering your headaches.
Don't know if you are still active here or even still interested in Jake/Bella fandom. But you would seriously make me the happiest girl on earth if you would get your ass over here and post something.
But seriously I hope all is well even if you don't come back to us.
| Guest chapter 22 . 1/3
Loving the story! The Britishisms DEFINITELY take away from the plot for me, only because this is supposed to be America, yeah? I'm still reading, though, to see what happens. I know you put loads of work into it and
it does show.
| Eh I give it a 5 chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
I read up to chapter six but I can't take it anymore. You've got Bella falling in love with a wolf. An actual wolf, whom she felt a strong connection with before she even figured out that they were humans. It's so gross; it's not a love story you're writing, it's beastiality. And why has Bella seemed to have completely forgotten about Jacob while she focuses on the wolf? Very out of character.
| mackeycheri82 chapter 18 . 4/15/2016
Lol, OMG that was so freaking hot I think it set the whole city on fire.
| Guest chapter 65 . 3/22/2016
This is a very interesting storyline
Not necessarily well written has many mistakes and is very confusing
Overall a good read if you are okay with the books being mangled
| g8rreader chapter 40 . 2/7/2016
You obviously did this story a long time ago, but it is really great writing, thank you!
| Lexi chapter 65 . 1/20/2016
Is there a new book?! Please tell me there is a next one?!
| Guest chapter 25 . 1/13/2016
I love this but the italics are bothering me. It confuses me cause i always associate it with a thought but you used italics and regular font at the same time while the people are having conversations which is really confusing
| MommaJess chapter 65 . 12/2/2015
Hi. So if you still maintain an active account I wanted to tell you that I came across your story yesterday. I was immediately drawn into your complicated storyline and character descriptions. I actually read until 4am and only Hot a little under three hours of sleep! I may have even snuck in a few chapters today at work to finish up all 64. :-) In your last chapter you mentioned having a health concern with headaches, I hope that is better. I checked your bio and saw that there was not a sequel posted and I would imagine that there might not be one at this point. If you have any desire to share, I would be sincerely interested to hear how the story played out in your head. Even a Cliff's Notes version! I hate to leave good characters floating around in my head so I thought I would send a quick note, just on the off chance you might still get an alert for review. I truly and sincerely hope all is well with you. MommaJess
| JustARead chapter 24 . 11/2/2015
Oh la la
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