Reviews for The Phantom Menace: The Unauthorized Rewrite
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 14 . 4/20/2016
A very good end to Episode 1.

I really like what you did with Episode 1. Better than canon in many ways I would say.
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 13 . 4/20/2016
Another good chapter.

Darth Maul killed two Jedi this time around. He's deadly...and so full of hate.

Obi-Wan now has a dangerous enemy who will one day seek vengeance.
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 12 . 4/20/2016
Another good chapter.

Plotting and planning abound...
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 11 . 4/20/2016
Another good chapter.

Very soon, the action is going to start...
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 10 . 4/20/2016
Another good chapter.

I have the feeling the battle will be even better than what happened in the original movie...
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 9 . 4/20/2016
Another good chapter.

Onto the next one!
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 8 . 4/20/2016
Another very good chapter.

Darth Maul's hate grows...
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 7 . 4/20/2016
Another very good chapter.

Onto the next one!
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 6 . 4/20/2016
Another very good chapter.

Not surprised Padme thinks Qui-Gon is arrogant, an expected reaction honestly.

Perfect, so this is why Qymaen became a deadly Jedi Hunter...

I like how you have included Ventress, she was seen once before in an earlier chapter but I wonder what role she will play...

Qui-Gon does have a point. If the Jedi don't have Anakin, the Sith will be more than happy to make him their apprentice...
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 5 . 4/20/2016
Another good chapter.

I did not mind the midi-chlorian thing, but I am glad you got rid of it. I know how hated it is so I plan to leave it out of my Star Wars stories too. And I like it better without midi-chlorians.

And I am not surprised some are mad at Qui-Gon for betting the ship in the race. I expected the reaction, it should have been shown more in the movie, or shown if it wasn't shown at all.
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 4 . 4/19/2016
Good and interesting so far.

Onto the next chapter!
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 3 . 4/19/2016
Good chapter.

I like how things are being done so far.
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 2 . 4/19/2016
Another good one.

And the Queen just died, and Darth Maul makes his appearance. Scenes we didn't see in the movie, interesting...

Qui-Gon Jinn used to be my favorite Star Wars characters, but then Luminara took that spot, think Rey will be a very close second. I like the way you did things so far.

No Jar Jar Binks but I don't mind. After all, he is quite hated. I don't hate Jar Jar, I find him funny actually.
Jonin Neji Hyuga chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
I was interested in how this re-write goes, and so far, its good.

Onto the next chapter.
mikkeybones chapter 14 . 3/3/2016
This is an amazing fic and I'm so glad that it was recommended on tumblr ( post/139717501001/hi-you-mentioned-a-rewrite-of-the-star-wars) because I've spent the past several hours reading it and it's now replacing the actual prequels as my headcanon for what happened. Extremely well-written, helps the events of the Phantom Menace makes sense, gives me sympathy for characters on both sides-and no Jar Jar. Thank you for sharing! Onto the next one.
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