Reviews for A Puppet of a Puppet
PenguinAzuMarine chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
yaaaaay i looove it
Taiyoukousen-sama chapter 1 . 2/25/2011
1 word can discribe this and that word is HOT!
AkastukiDragon chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
nicely done
DarkMGGirl chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
OMg I just realized something...Deidara slept with Sasori still inside of him...HOT! XD
LucifersTenshi chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Not bad at all for a first fic. I thought I'd point out that there was no preperation (read a few other fics and you'll know what I mean) or lubrication. Without either of these, it would've been extremely painful, especially if said events hadn't taken place before. Other than that, it seemed a bit rushed, but was good overall.
sweet-and-simple chapter 1 . 2/19/2010
the last sentence caught me. I love a seme redhead... Seriously, I do. Fabulous!
StarlightDweller chapter 1 . 1/20/2010
LOVE IT!
Ryuuk96 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I loved the ending! Also, I've always wondered...if Sasori's a puppet, can he cum? XD
Junjou-chan chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
*attempts to clean up nosebleed* um...two words...NAUGHTY SASORI! XD

Lolz, I absolutely loved this! Deidara was so cute and Sasori was so deliciously evil! Awesome writing and characterization! -

J-C
AngelDei 4 Ever chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Wow...w I love it! So adorable!
Dittodots chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
AW! T_T So cute! The only problem I have with this are the spelling errors, make sure to read over the story a few times- it helps even though its painful to do O_-
Willow-Kit chapter 1 . 1/15/2010
WOW

BEAN!

THIS WAS TOTALY AWSOME! _

it was one of the best yaoi i have read _ write more pwese

hehe hehe

love sprout xx
MagdalenaCS chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
*w* wa this is a good lemon

jijiji dei can feel the sasori' control of puppet master

I love this!

kisses from Chile
black55widow chapter 1 . 1/14/2010
Good job!