Reviews for Brave New World |
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Zephiraya chapter 2 . 6/30/2013 Lovely! Absolutely terrific! Your writing is very fluent and uses good grammar and vocabulary and the plot is deep and has many interlacing levels. All I ever look for in a good story. I loved it and I'll be sure to enjoy everything you decide to add ) xoxo Zephi |
a-bird-that-syes chapter 22 . 6/28/2013 It's been years since you've updated. Usually, I don't, but I'm still waiting for an update on this story. I just can't wait to see what happens next; to see the reactions to Harry and what the others will do, and the reactions to their actions. I absolutely love this story. I really do hope that you'll get around to updating this story, preferably soon. |
Idriss Pukka chapter 22 . 6/24/2013 I don't see many Blaise/Harry pairings that are this great, but wow you blew my mind with the last statement "Kill them all." I see the last update date and I truly hope that you find whatever muse you used for this work of art to complete it. kudos :) |
Jaricchi chapter 22 . 6/21/2013 truly fascinating story! I really enjoyed reading it thus far and I truly think the story has merit. Plus I enjoy the Blaise x Harry story without the obvious smut. 8D I like how fast yet mild paced their love story is headed. 8D Thank you for writing, though I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while, I still do hope that there will be a follow up. 8D So here's to you and your skill! Ever Reading Tsuki |
Guest chapter 22 . 6/15/2013 This is an amazing story! Please please oh please update! |
Kimpatsu no Hoseki chapter 22 . 6/11/2013 This is SO good! I am loving this story! I really like reading stories like this where Harry comes into his knowledge and takes up his responsibilities despite what others want. I can't wait to read more. |
KKK3 chapter 22 . 6/5/2013 And you left it there! At its most exciting! Is this story abandoned? Because it is really good, and I haven't read such a realistic and exciting fic in ages! You are incredibly talented! But is the fic abandoned or do you have a sequel? |
MADStar529 chapter 22 . 5/13/2013 UPDATE SOON PLEASE! HOPE YOU HAVEN'T ABANDONED IT! |
HisBloodyRefuge chapter 22 . 5/11/2013 This is a great story, I loved it so much. Is it abandoned though? |
Loliviech chapter 22 . 5/8/2013 I have read this story once before but I lost sight of it. After finding it again a few ddays ago, I reread everything and it is still as wonderful as it was the first time. I can't believe this is your first Fanfic, you did a really splendid job! I hope you will continue this one day, especially since there are so few good Blaise/Harry stories out there. |
Where's Boo05 chapter 22 . 5/1/2013 I know this story hasn't been updated for nearly 3 years and I hope nothing bad has happened to you! but please please tell me you haven't stopped writing this amazing story! |
ImUpToNoGood chapter 22 . 4/20/2013 Oh, my! This is really good. I am sad that the last update was three years ago. There is so much here worth developing, and I hope your muse wakes up and finds the writing frenzy. I would love to read further. I like the subtle beauty of the old ways, and the information about wizarding culture. I like that Harry has grown up, but is still not perfect. I like how you are developing Blaise, Daphne, and Tracey, and also that you allow Neville his place- a Neville that is growing into himself. I find myself hoping that Ron really is under some sort of spell... He seems almost a caricature of his worst points... The fact that you have Harry wonder about that is what redeems that excess in the story. What IS with the Weasleys? Is it just unthinking prejudice? A few corrections if you are open to them: apart from separate from; a part of part of a whole or group. There is no 'apart of'. (That one jolted me throughout the story.). I also noticed a few instances of using 'anymore' (any longer) instead of 'any more', and a few others where the combined word (with a different meaning) was used in place of two separate words. Overall, the story was well written, compelling, and unique, and I hope you find the spark of inspiration (and the time) to finish it! |
mabidiso chapter 22 . 4/18/2013 Oh, how I wish you had continued this story until the end. I want to see more of Harrigan't Uncle Regan and see Harry become a part of his family. I want to see Harrigan and Blaise together on more of those gorgeous dates and encounters, and would love to see them bond and merge their magic and lives together. Would love to see them interacting with the Coven and much more fun and banter with Tracey and Daphne. Would love to see Harry train and learn so much more with Leo and Septima. Would LOVE to see Harrigan put an end to Dumbledore's depradations into his life and shake off the chains the Weasleys and Dumbledore seek to tie him down with. Would love so much to see Harrigan become the person he is meant to be and to leave far behind him those things that only drag him down. Most of all, would love to see Harrigan standing happy and successful, surrounded by people who love him and give him support and friendship and enriching companionship that doesn't demean nor weaken him, but that would make his life more fulfilling and rich and worth defending. |
SessyFuchs chapter 22 . 4/16/2013 Hi I just wanted to say that this story is absolutly amazing *-* When I startedreading I couldn't stop until the very last chapter. I love the way you made your Harry (Harrigan) and his relationship with Blaise is so dreamy 3 I'm dying to know what will happen next at the battle at Hogsmeade, especialy since Harry just gave this last comand! So I have to ask: Do you plan to continue this story? I know it isn't easy to write; You need time and Ideas and the right words. But this story is worth it. Absolute worth it. Dedecan |
banana175 chapter 22 . 4/14/2013 Please, please, please continue with this story, it is amazing and one of the best written fanfictions I have ever read! I love all of the old ways part of the story and Harry/Harrigan's heritage and newly discovered family. I would love to read more of the story so I really hope you continue! xx |